owenhrm 2008-4-26 23:08
听写心得-备考策略(cheese)
今天小马布置了听写训练,其实布置也全靠自觉,晚上我开始了插自己的征程.今天听的是american cheese,较比恶心,插了一晚上.y&FZ sI[:j
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Good morning, class. Is anyone [color=red]awared[/color][color=black](aware)[/color] that a boycott in 1776 is still affecting the American cheese industry today? To introduce our unit on commercial cheese production, I'm going to talk about this boycott.
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For those of you [color=red]who were[/color] (who're) unfamiliar with the term boycott, a boycott refers to [color=red]a[/color] (when) people rufuse to buy a product or use a service in protest of something. Before we discuss the boycott in 1776, we must brifly discuss where cheese comes from. ;}8c e9B W:r r
There were more than 400kinds of cheese with over 2000 different names. Cheeses ([u]is)[/u] made from milk. Most [color=red]cheeses[/color][color=black](cheese) ([u]is[/u])[/color] made from cow's milk,although many cheeses are made from goat, sheep, even water buffalo and camel's milk. The fat [color=red]contant[/color][color=black](content)[/color] in the milk from each animal differs, causing the color of the milk to vary. Some milk looks creamy white, while other milk looks almost pale yellow. The cheese made from the milk, [color=red]that[/color][color=black](thus),[/color] ranges ([u]in[/u]) color from creamy white to very pale yellow. All cheese is naturally some shade fo white.
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What about Chedder cheese and American cheese? Well, you're right. These cheeses are clearly orange and you've identified the [color=red]affect[/color][color=black](effect)[/color] of the boycott I mentioned ([u]at[/u]) the very beginning of the class.
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To understand the boycott, you need to understand first that Chedder cheese and American cheese are the same [color=red]cheese[/color][color=black](cheeses)[/color]. Second, you need to know the Chedder cheese is naturally white. Just before 1776, the colonists in America were angry with the king of England. One of the key issues was [color=red]taxiation[/color][color=black](taxation)[/color] without representation. [color=red]Taxiation[/color][color=black](taxation)[/color] without representation was a [color=red]phrased[/color][color=black](phrase)[/color] that summarized the frustrations many colonists felt with the colonial system. They wanted [color=red]to represent those[/color] (representatives) who [color=red]can [/color][color=black](could) [/color]voice their concerns to the king. The colonists felt [color=red]that[/color][color=black](it)[/color] was unfair that they were required to pay [color=red]every increasing[/color] [color=black](ever-increasing) [/color]taxes on products [color=red]important[/color][color=black](imported)[/color] from England without any representation of their concerns to the king.
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Many American colonists protested by boycotting English products. The most famous of these is tea. You've perhaps heard people say that they [color=red]liked[/color] [color=black](like) [/color]to drink Boston tea. This is actually hot water rather than tea. Some Bostanians ([u]preferred)[/u] drinking hot water instead of tea to avoid paying taxes on English tea. And this hot water became known as Boston tea. And of course, you've heard the Boston tea party of 1773, when the American dressed as Indians dumped hundreds ([u]of[/u]) chests of tea into the harbor to avoid paying [color=red]taxes[/color][color=black](a tax)[/color] [color=red]posed[/color][color=black](imposed)[/color] by the British on tea. Oh ^IX'e;s
[color=red]Unless [/color][color=black]([u]A lesser-known[/u])[/color] [color=red]the[/color] [color=black]product[/color] that colonists boycotted was Chedder cheese. Many colonists refused to buy English Chedder because they wouldn'[color=red]t[color=black](ve had to)[/color] [/color]pay huge taxes on it. To distinguish American cheese, American farmers added [color=red]a carriage[/color][color=black](carrot juice)[/color] to their milk. American cheese was easily identified as orange chedder, and colonists strongly prefered American cheese over the more [color=red]heavily[/color][color=black](heavily-taxed)[/color] English cheese.:F aN!K;}} z-m
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After producing orange chedder for several years, American farmers became used to adding the coloring, consumers became used to buying orange cheese. The boycotts ([u]and[/u]) the war ended, but the orange coloring in American cheese remained. Over 200 years later, white chendder is still [color=red]in[/color][color=black](a)[/color] [color=red]nolvelty[/color] [color=black](novelty) [/color]in the American stores. Orange chedder is still considerably more common. Wy&Ma r3V V
Well, that's all for today. Tomorrow we'll discuss commercial production fo soft cheeses. Please read chapter 12 in your text [color=red]book[/color] before class.
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可以看出来错误都比较白痴,由于时间原因我今天只完成了两个步骤.听写之后才发现自己做的题很多都是错的,听写得自以为还可以,但是做题怎么正确率这么低啊?小马,能告诉我不?呵呵,请大家多包涵,大家加油啊……如果时间允许，我会尽量更新的，谢谢大家~~~
Horse 2008-4-27 18:36
（1）你先听写再做题是不对的
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（2）如果你听写后再做题却仍然有错误，说明你听写的不对。你听一句写一句的时候不去思考这句讲的是什么意思 么？每句听写后都应该知道是什么意思，所以听写后通篇就该全部理解，所以做题就不该错了。但是你做题仍然错了，只能说你听写的时候不去理解每句的意思
owenhrm 2008-4-27 22:36
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（2）如果你听写后再做题却仍然有错误，说明你听写的不对。你听一句写一句的时候不去思考这句讲的是什么意思 么？每句听写后都应该知道是什么意思，所以听写后通篇就该全部理解，所以 ... [/quote].y:Z6s1g2O
恩?我是听写之后再看我刚才做的题发现错误很多,我是严格按照你的步骤来的啊.先做题然后听写的,我是没有对答案才发现有几个是错的.
owenhrm 2008-5-1 22:14
几天没更新了,实在是听了没时间写上来,偷懒了,呵呵.今天献给大家的内容是Mark Twain1x4f7L_an*g S
Today, we'll be discussing one of the most popularmodern American writers. This writer's real name is Samuel Climens, but you might not recognize that name, because he used [color=red]his[/color][color=black](a)[/color] pen name writing. Do [color=red]anyone[/color][color=black](any)[/color] of you recognize [color=red]that[/color][color=black](the)[/color] name Samuel Clemens? Does anyone know the name that Samuel Clemens [color=red]use[/color][color=black](used)[/color] on [color=red]a story[/color] [color=black](his stories) [/color][color=red]or[/color][color=black](and)[/color] novels? Let's look at a [color=red]famous[/color][color=black]()[/color] picture of this famous writer. This should give you a good hint.
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So, now that [color=red]you'll[/color][color=black](you)[/color] see [color=red]the[/color][color=black](his)[/color] picture, I'm sure you understand that the writer whose birth name ([u]was[/u]) Samuel Clemens, [color=red]it's[/color][color=black](is)[/color] much better known by the name Mark Twain. 5pv s0I(D CkU
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Twain's work is popular for many reasons. We'll focus on [color=red]the numbers[/color][color=black](a number)[/color] of reasons. Actually, ([u]to be[/u]) precise, we'll focus on three, ([u]on[/u]) three specific reasons that make Twain so enjoyable. First, Twain was able to express human nature [color=red]to[/color][color=black](though)[/color] his character sketches. Twain was incredibly talented [color=red]that the created[/color][color=black](at creating)[/color] characters ([u]that[/u]) were really human and ([u]that[/u]) readers could easily identify with. Second, Twain tried to reflect real speach in his writing. When his [color=red]character[/color][color=black](characters)[/color] speak, they don't speak in textbook prose. Instead they speak just like any average[color=red] joke[/color][color=black](joe)[/color] on the street, and this is something else that helps readers to identify with them. Third, Twain was a master ([u]at[/u]) combining humor and satire. He used humor to make his works amusing to read [color=red]well[/color][color=black](while)[/color] at the same time, he satirezed [color=red]the[/color][color=black]()[/color] elements of society [color=red]the land[/color][color=black](that lent)[/color] themselves to it. Today, I'll give you a brief introduction to the three works [color=red]were[/color][color=black](we'll)[/color] read by Mark Twain, and show how each of them is ([u]a[/u]) terrific example of one of the characteristics I just mentioned. In:j lQ}
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The first is a short story called "[i]The Celebrated Jumping Frog of Calaveras County[/i]". This is considered [color=red]to[/color][color=black]()[/color] his [color=black][color=red]best[/color][color=#ff0000] [/color][color=black](beat) [/color]early[/color] work because it is the first work that demonstrates his ability to develope very human character sketches. In this story, we find [color=red]marvellous discriptions[/color][color=#000000](marvelous descriptions) of various ([u]frentious men[/u]) as they take park in an unusual competition. And I'm sure you can guess from the title of the story just what this unusual competition was. [/color]7l}%wQ@0C7z l
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[color=#000000]The second is a book "[i]Huckleberry Finn[/i]". It's a delightful tale about a young boy and a runaway slave. It's famous as the first American novel that reflected the real speech. Twain manages to capture in written form, the language [u](as it was)[/u] spoken in homes and in the street. This feature [color=red]mark[/color][color=black](marked)[/color] such changes in American [color=red]litreature[/color][color=black](literature)[/color] that Hemingway said: modern American [color=#ff0000]litreature[/color][color=black](literature)[/color] begins with "[i]Huckleberry Finn[/i]". [/color]!M,e&{8K.H
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[color=#000000]As a young man, Twain spent five years as steam boat pilot on the [i]Mississippi[/i]. The [color=red]advance[/color][color=black](events) ([u]in[/u])[/color] "[i]Huckleberry Finn[/i]" reflect Twain's [color=red]intemate[/color][color=black](intimate)[/color] knowledge of the [i]Mississippi[/i]. It was also during his time[color=red] then[/color] [color=black](the) [/color]on [i]Mississippi[/i] that Twain claims to have developed his knowledge of human nature, because he had the opportunity to come into contact with all kinds of people while he was working on the river. He later said it was through this brief schooling that I became [color=red]aquintant [/color][color=black](aquainted) [/color]with all defferent types of human nature. [/color]
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[color=#000000]Our last book, "[i]A Connecticut Yankee in King Arthur's Court[/i]", is one of Twain's most skillful combinations of humor and satire. This book is one of Twain's later novels and his later works tended to [color=red]being[/color][color=black](be)[/color] increasingly ([u]satirical[/u]). "[i]A Connecticut Yankee in King Arthur's Court[/i]" is a ([u]satirical[/u]) comment on the Industrial Revolution. Twain felt that a very unwelcome result of the Industrial Revolution was ([u]that it[/u]) made people insensitive [color=red]to[/color][color=black](toward)[/color] other human beings. [/color] FC1OO u
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[color=#000000]As you read these three [color=red]books[/color][color=black](works)[/color], notice the way his uses words [color=red]of[/color][color=black](that)[/color] reflected real speech, his ability to write character sketches [color=red]and[/color][color=black](that)[/color] capture the [color=red]assence[/color][color=black](essence)[/color] of each character's human nature, and his use of humor and satire. [/color]
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[color=#000000]For friday, please read "[i]The Celebrated Jumping Frog of Calaveras County[/i]" and begin reading the first 10 chapters of "[i]Huckleberry Finn[/i]", which we'll [color=red]be began to[/color][color=black](begin)[/color] [color=red]discuss in[/color][color=black](discussing)[/color] next week.[/color]
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今天的文章里有很多书名啊什么的，我都用斜体表示了，没有标记并不代表我都会写，只是懒没写而已，呵呵
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owenhrm 2008-5-2 09:41
[quote]原帖由 [i]Horse[/i] 于 2008-5-2 00:30 发表 [url=http://www.xiaomaguohe.net/bbs/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=141460&ptid=12008][img]http://www.xiaomaguohe.net/bbs/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]7p)]`g6^Di
你听的文章内容上有点简单，加强点难度 [/quote]
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:funk: :funk: :funk: 那就选择备考策略呗,小马,可以吗
