kerry1234 2008-5-1 00:51
昨晚写的，希望帮助修改！
[b][font=Times New Roman][size=3]Why people attend college? People attend college or university for many different reasons. For example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge. Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and example to support your answers. [/size][/font][/b]
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Today, we are not only facing our own society, but also confronting the entire world, such as globe affairs and wars. We need understand what’s happening around the world. Also, there are lots of companies which pay their employees high salaries, they need their employees have good education and wide knowledge. As far as I concerned, I think people should attend college or university to get new experiences, knowledge and career preparation. [/font][/size]
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First of all, college or university don’t like our high school, it’s completely difference. We will meet more different people from the world, face more though situations we ever had before. It’s a big challenge for who go to college or university; it means we can get new experiences. It is very consequential for everyone to obtain life experiences, even more important than knowledge. In our society, company need the person who has abundant experiences; the country also need president who has politic experiences, health care experiences and so on. Like ‘21’, for instance, it’s a movie that tall us life experience is the most magnificent thing if we want to go to high-educated school or good companies. So, the best way we can get new and useful experience is go to college or university. [/font][/size]
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In addition, college or university also provides plenty of career preparation courses for students. Nowadays, most of companies don’t need a rookie, they want to pick a person who already know how to help company earn more benefits. Therefore, it we want to defeat our contenders or succeed in our own careers, we must go to college or university.[/font][/size]
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Finally, as I mentioned before, we need new knowledge to fill our brain, making us more intelligent and wisdom to avoid making mistakes. I remember one person who said “ what’s the rush if we build something for eternity.” Certainly, the knowledge is the goal for human to chase, to seek forever.[/font][/size]
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In the conclusion, people should go to college or university. It’s the objective they need to pursue; it’s crucial chance for them to go somewhere they want to after finishing college or university. We need experiences, we need knowledge and career preparation as well. In my opinion, the most efficient way is attend college or university.[/font][/size]
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[font=Times New Roman][size=3]Kerry 04/29/08 [/size][/font]
kerry1234 2008-5-3 06:32
nobody helps me?
why nobody helps me to revise my essay?
s my essay not so good to revise??
I dont get it!!!:( :( :( :(
