yoyo 2008-5-5 16:38
作文一篇，大家往死里拍啊！（两小时的心血啊）
[size=14pt][font=Times New Roman][color=mediumturquoise][size=5]A zoo has no useful purpose, do you agree?[/size][/color][/font][/size]
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[size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]With a growing amount of zoos, increasing quantities of animals are captured by human. People consider the behavior that to protect animals from dangerous and also provide a chance to contact with animals closely. Ironically, the method renders a contradictory affect both animals and people.[/font][/size]
[size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]The initial object of the invention of the zoo maybe is to provide an opportunity for people to access closely to animals. In this way, we might be acquainted with their habits and life styles. However, people ignore that instincts of animals only show up when they live in nature freely, when they run in forest, catching preys, or playing with each other. Animals we visit in the zoo are just bodies without souls. The zoo for them likes a prison that takes away not only their freedom but also their characteristics. If the prison is a place which is used to punish those people who breach a law legislated by people, then what crimes animals commit so that people capture them and finite their free?[/font][/size]
[size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]Moreover, some of the animals in the zoo are injured because of careless or ignorant of people. In general, there are several performances that are produced by animals in the zoo to be prepared for tourists. Previous the performance, animals are supposed to be trained involuntarily hundreds, even thousands of times. During the process, they often get wounded, and sometimes, trainer fails to offer food to them as they couldn’t complete a action. On the other hand, animals would probable hurt person. A recent report from television was that a tiger in the zoo eat a child who dropped carelessly into the region where the tiger lived. It is not the first time that this affair occurred as well as not the last time that the similar thing will happen.[/font][/size]
[size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]Even though, our cognitions for animals may become from abstract imagination to cement materials via observing them in the zoo. In contrast with the harm that the zoo causes to animals, the knowledge that we can obtain in the zoo is not worth mentioning. Therefore, in my point of view, the zoo is of less usage to people, especially is harmful to animals.[/font][/size]
chershang002 2008-5-6 11:52
……单从文章本身来说，很不错。
开头结尾处最好明确点出你的观点
另外，一定要限时练习……
