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[font=Arial][size=12pt]While many who maintain the view that the easier-prepared food bring some unfavorable consequences claim that these easier-prepared food don’t taste good and make people lose their passion in daily life, in my opinion, such change is positive and it did improve the quality of people’s life , which means people can enjoy civilized pleasures with more spare time.[/size][/font]
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In initially , one issue which makes my support this is people needn’t to spent so much time and use so much energy in order to finfish these everyday tasks. In the past , to prepared a single dinner, housewives had to work for hours to do so : wash the dirty vegetables brought form markets , slice the meat and pork then cook. Every step of preparation was a time-consuming task. today the situation might be different. .the only thing you should do is just enter into a supermarket where provide clean vegetables and meat , even some relevant ingredient, pay the bill and then take a few minutes to make them into a delicious dinner. In this case, everyone can enjoy their leisure ang have a pleasure life.[/size][/font]
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An additional factor is food preparation is no longer a tedious tasks in a sense, that is to say thee easier-prepared food provide us variety of food. In the past, we ate one or two kinds of food everyday ,even a delicious food can let us feel boring if we ate it everyday, so we never found eat our dinner is enjoyable . but now, with the help of these foods , a house wife, after a day’s hard work , can prepare several family’s favorite dishes in only a few minutes, which can make the whole family sit together, eat together and share what they experienced that day[/size][/font]
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An equally essential factory which deserves people’s attention is those food can make people eat healthy. Always, these semi-finished food are clean and nutritious. they provide what we need in our daily life suitable. on the contrary , if one in constantly drink pop or eating fires food or food with high cholesterol and grease, they can hardly be able to keep a healthy weight. So eating those easier-prepared food is a excellent way to keep healthy.[/size][/font]
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Judging from all these evidence offered above, we can arrive at the conclusion that such a change is a positive and it did improve the quality of people’s life.[/size][/font]
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[font=Times New Roman] 先写在纸上的,打上去花了半个小时,速度要再提升啊...本文写长了点,412字,到底多少最合适呢??[/font]

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昨天刚考完，提几个原则性的建议
1.以后一定要在电脑上打，直接对着屏幕想，感觉不一样的。其实ETS的作文题目都是185题目中比较常见的（如果在185中的话），建议lz可以多写一些常见的段子，各种不同题材的，其它较偏僻的题目要想好理由。写一篇作文抵得上100篇范文，前提是你已经对文章的结构，段落的结构了然在胸。对于范文嘛，像李笑来那本书，我觉得他的文章结构不值得借鉴，写作思路也比较诡异，但是值得借鉴的是他的语义表达很清楚，很accurate， 有些话可以背下来，写得多了就成自己的了。
2.字数嘛，戴云教主说，the 长er，the better. 其实我平时写作文限时不过430字，不会超过450，但是最后昨天写了500+，说真的，500多不是难事，在考场上我们的能力很比平时强很多，根本不会紧张，我也没考过G，作文你写的多了，自然就有感觉了。
3.我在考场上打字错了很多，希望lz在打字正确率上练习一下。
4.我大致看了一下，说真的，lz的语言功底还有待提高，用的词还有搭配上让人很别扭，比如use so much energy, 开头结尾不够有力。建议lz自己打造一个自己的模板，语法错误有些多。这也是为楼主好，呵呵