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词语升级

词语升级最近在练词语升级！但突然不知道怎么弄了~~
SX&Dtuz-_Ry 各位大马可不可以跟我做个示范，这是一片以前的作文，高一时期的。只有5句话，谢谢。
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[font=Times New Roman]我记得以前上庄重老师课的时候他说过一些。比如because 改成 ，for  。 还有很多有没有人能作个总结！谢谢了！~~[/font]0u1?j4v9A
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帮你总结下，最大的问题在于一句话里n个动词 不像英语。

我也这样觉得！不过高中老师是要求只能写5句话的啊！
eA-@8r.wph 所以要并句！
X2y-pJ+o!w4gn:Z+y+R 我也没办法！帮我改改吧！