crash 2008-5-12 22:22
5月17考试 作文求拍， 当练改错
学校今天布置作文作业，又是那种5句话的作文，郁闷！！（我高一）不去管他，写成一篇托福水平的，明天去砸俺老师的台！！嘿嘿
是关于环境的
[font=Times New Roman][size=12pt]My school lies on the foot of a mountain with a river nearby. The surroundings are so superb that we all enjoy our schooldays there. In the early morning, we can hear the unfurling of leaves and the rustle of an insect’s wings. In the evening, we can hear the lonely cry of a bird and the arguments of the frogs around a pond. We enjoy the soft sound of the wind darting over the face of the pond, and the smell of the wind itself, cleansed by the rain. We enjoy the full sight pure green color of the forest and fish swimming in the stream happily. The fish, the trees, the air are all precious to us and we feel as if we have already been in the paradise.[/size]
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However, good thing doesn’t last very long. Since a terrible chemical factory was set up near our school. Things change. The noise chase the lovely birds away, maybe this is not their home any more. Waste is being dumped into the river and the fish are dying. They cried: Why did you do this to us. We cried: Please give me back our paradise. The fresh air is polluted. Chemical gas fills each of our lung and we get sick. Even the regular class couldn’t go on. The trees are turning yellow, the air become dusty and smelly, the river is stained and our paradise is turning into a hell.[/size]
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[size=12pt]This fact makes me start to worry about the environment. It’s widely acknowledged that human without good environment is like flower without sunshine. Unfortunately, human are like aliens who comes to the earth. They take any resource they want, without caring the feeling of the earth. [/size][font=ˎ̥][size=12pt]We are killing the self-giving mother. We are too avaricious in taking what we want without giving anything back. What's more, we always want to get more than we actually need--more clothes, more food, more furniture, more factories, more cars--the more the better, and maybe the more the faster to bury ourselves by our own hands.[/size][/font]
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[font=ˎ̥][size=12pt]There are a lot more factories which do harm to our environment every day. Although they [/size][/font][size=12pt]will accomplish more economic profits for the society, we could not ignore the harmful effect it will lead to.[/size][font=ˎ̥][size=12pt] The tendency of global warming as a result of excessive emission of carbon-dioxide and many other environment problems warm us that, we must do something to prevent the environment form getting worse and worse. So as you see, people need to respect the Earth and try every means to preserve it. Only in the way, can we make a sustainable and harmonious life.[/size][/font]
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aqua 2008-5-16 18:14
意境优美
写的很好,高一这样，真的是惭愧啊,一个建议,正式考试最好不要写缩写
