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解析NCE3第41课 完美满分作文样板(z)

[size=3][size=15pt][font=Times New Roman]NCE3[/font][/size][font=宋体][size=15pt]的[/size][/font][size=15pt][font=Times New Roman]41[/font][/size][font=宋体][size=15pt]课[/size][/font][/size][size=15pt][font=Times New Roman]
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[/size][size=3][color=red][font=宋体]以此帖献给那些写作文完全下不了笔的[/font][/color][color=red][size=10.5pt][font=Times New Roman]T[/font][/size][/color][color=red][font=宋体]友们[/font][/color][/size][color=red][size=10.5pt] [size=3][/size]
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[size=3][color=red][font=Times New Roman]([/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]这篇[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]NCE[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]的文章的语言广泛适用语[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]TOEFL[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]写作中的[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]preference[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]题目和同意或不同意题目[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman].[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]文章的本身是写城市生活比乡村的好[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]根[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]185[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]的有一题是一致的[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman].[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]看我的分析是一部分[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]非牛们把里边的句子背下来[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]写作的时候换换主宾就可以直接使用[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]![/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]效果很好[/font][/color][/size][color=red][font=Times New Roman][size=3]!)[/size] [size=3][/size]
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[size=3][font=Times New Roman][color=black]The quiet life of the country has never appealed to me[/color][color=red]([/color][/font][color=red][font=宋体]第一句清楚的称述自己的观点[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]但是没有用模版式的[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]agree or disagree[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]或者[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]I like, I do not like[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]之类的[/font][/color][font=Times New Roman][color=red])[/color][color=black]. City born and city bred[/color][color=red]([/color][/font][color=red][font=宋体]经典句子[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]作文的[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]highlight,[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]在别的地方同样可以移植类似的结构[/font][/color][font=Times New Roman][color=red])[/color][color=black], I have always regarded[/color][color=red]([/color][/font][color=red][font=宋体]避免了使用[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]think[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]这样的词汇[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]以后大家要写[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]think[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]的时候[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]就用[/font][/color][font=Times New Roman][color=red]regard as) [/color][color=black]the country as something you look at through a train window[/color][color=red]([/color][/font][color=red][font=宋体]细节的具象化[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],ETS[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]不喜欢那些抽象的大道理却偏好这些很具体的小细节[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]这也就是为什么所有的[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]Topic[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]里边都有一个[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]specific[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]的原因了[/font][/color][font=Times New Roman][color=red])[/color][color=black], or something you occasionally[/color][color=red]([/color][/font][color=red][font=宋体]副词的使用充分的表达作者的感情和限定成分[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]同时避免了[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]sometimes[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]这种相对常见的使用[/font][/color][font=Times New Roman][color=red]) [/color][color=black]visit during the weekend. [u]Most of my friends live in the city, yet they always go into raptures at the mere mention of the country[/u][/color][u][color=red]([/color][/u][/font][u][color=red][font=宋体]超强的句子[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]!go into rapture,[/font][/color][/u][u][color=red][font=宋体]这里用一个很动感的短语表现了[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]friend[/font][/color][/u][u][color=red][font=宋体]的狂喜[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][/u][u][color=red][font=宋体]同时使用了[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]always[/font][/color][/u][u][color=red][font=宋体]和[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]mere[/font][/color][/u][u][color=red][font=宋体]两个词构成鲜明的对比[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][/u][u][color=red][font=宋体]表达很生动[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]!)[/font][/color][/u][font=Times New Roman][color=black]. Though they extol the virtues[/color][color=red]([/color][/font][color=red][font=宋体]赞美的高级说法[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]用一个[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]3[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]词的短语替代一个干瘪的[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]praise,[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]不仅在字数上多了[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]而且表达更好[/font][/color][font=Times New Roman][color=red])[/color][color=black] of the peaceful life, only one of hem has ever gone to live in the country and he was back in town within[/color][color=red](within[/color][/font][color=red][font=宋体]虽然不是什么高级的东西[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]但是大家常常忘记用[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]或者根本没有用[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]within[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]的意识[/font][/color][font=Times New Roman][color=red]) [/color][color=black]six months. Even he still lives under the illusion[/color][color=red](under the illusion[/color][/font][color=red][font=宋体]活在幻想之下[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]这个短语本身就很好[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]同时[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]大家在写作时也可以用[/font][/color][font=Times New Roman][color=red]:a multitude of people live under the illusion that A is superior to B, however, from my perspective…)[/color][color=black] that country life is somehow superior to town life([/color][color=red]somehow[/color][/font][color=red][font=宋体]也是好词[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]![/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]当你要说有的人荒谬的观点时[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]就可以说[/font][/color][font=Times New Roman][color=red]:why some deem A as the optimal choice and somehow superior to B is really beyond me.)[/color][color=black]. He is forever talking[/color][color=red](be forever doing,[/color][/font][color=red][font=宋体]当强调一个动作的时候[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]这是很好的[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],be doing[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]比一个单一的[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]do[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]来的强烈得多[/font][/color][font=Times New Roman][color=red]) [/color][color=black]about the friendly people, the clean atmosphere[/color][color=red](atmosphere[/color][/font][color=red][font=宋体]的使用避免的用俗了的[/font][/color][font=Times New Roman][color=red]environment)[/color][color=black], the closeness to nature and the gentle pace[/color][color=red](gentle pace, gentle[/color][/font][color=red][font=宋体]完美的形容了乡村生活[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]准确而生动的形容词使用[/font][/color][font=Times New Roman][color=red]) [/color][color=black]of living. Nothing can be compared[/color][color=red]([/color][/font][color=red][font=宋体]又学到了[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]无与伦比的说法[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]在表达自己肯定的观点的时候可以使用[/font][/color][font=Times New Roman][color=red])[/color][color=black], he maintains, with the first cockcrow, the twittering of birds at dawn, the sight of the rising sun glinting on the trees and pastures. This idyllic pastoral scene is only part of the picture[/color][color=red](only part of the picture,[/color][/font][color=red][font=宋体]仅仅是问题的一个方面[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]这个短语是很常用的[/font][/color][font=Times New Roman][color=red]!).[/color][color=black] My friend fails to mention[/color][color=red]([/color][/font][color=red][font=宋体]这里用[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]fail to do[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]替代了[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]does not do,[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]因为[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]does not do[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]实在太低级了[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]而[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]fail to do[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]则是好很多[/font][/color][font=Times New Roman][color=red]) [/color][color=black]the long and friendless[/color][color=red]([/color][/font][color=red][font=宋体]漂亮的使用[/font][/color][font=Times New Roman][color=red])[/color][color=black] winter evenings in front of the TV[/color][color=red]([/color][/font][color=red][font=宋体]又是一个具体的细节[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]很符合[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]ETS[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]的口味[/font][/color][font=Times New Roman][color=red])[/color][color=black] -- virtually [/color][color=red]([/color][/font][color=red][font=宋体]在写作中[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]actually[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]这个概念是很容易出现了[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]这里使用了[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]virtually[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]替换[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]避免了撞车[/font][/color][font=Times New Roman][color=red])[/color][color=black]the only form[/color][color=red]([/color][/font][color=red][font=宋体]看来唯一的方式不仅仅只是[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]the only way, [/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]这里又用了一个替换[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]避免了过于普遍的用词[/font][/color][font=Times New Roman][color=red]) [/color][color=black]of entertainment. He says nothing[/color][color=red](ATTENTION:[/color][/font][color=red][font=宋体]作者一直没有用[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]does not,[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]却两次表达了否定[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],say nothing[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]肯定比[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]does not say[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]来得好[/font][/color][font=Times New Roman][color=red])[/color][color=black] about the poor selection of goods in the shops, or about those unfortunate people who have to travel from the country to the city every day to get to work. Why people are prepared to tolerate a four-hour journey each day for the dubious privilege of living in the country is beyond me[/color][color=red]([/color][/font][color=red][font=宋体]注意这里的[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]why…beyond me[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]这种用法[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]在你要反驳一种观点的时候是很有用的[/font][/color][font=Times New Roman][color=red])[/color][color=black]. [u]They could be saved so much misery and expense if they chose to live in the city where they rightly belong[/u][/color][u][color=red]([/color][/u][/font][u][color=red][font=宋体]其实这是一个作文结尾的不错模版[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][/u][/size][u][color=red][font=宋体][size=3]可以避免单一乏味的重复[/size][/font][/color][font=Times New Roman][color=red][size=3])[/size][/color][color=black][size=3]. [/size][size=3][/size]
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[size=3][font=Times New Roman][color=black]      If you can [u]do without[/u][/color][u][color=red](do without,[/color][/u][/font][u][color=red][font=宋体]把[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]…[/font][/color][/u][u][color=red][font=宋体]方在一边[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][/u][u][color=red][font=宋体]很强的用法[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][/u][u][color=red][font=宋体]写作的时候需要反驳一方并支持另一方的时候可以用[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][/u][u][color=red][font=宋体]如[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]:If you can do without the dubious merits of A, you will swiftly find B…)[/font][/color][/u][font=Times New Roman][color=black] the few pastoral pleasures of the country, you will find the city can provide you with the best that life can offer. You never have to travel miles to see your friends. They invariably[/color][color=red](invariably[/color][/font][color=red][font=宋体]是我强烈推荐的[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]always[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]的替换[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]这个词是人家很常用的[/font][/color][font=Times New Roman][color=red]) [/color][color=black]lie nearby and are always available for an informal chat or an evening's entertainment. Some of my acquaintances[/color][color=red]([/color][/font][color=red][font=宋体]避免了[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]friends[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]的重复[/font][/color][font=Times New Roman][color=red])[/color][color=black] in the country come up to town once or twice a year([/color][/font][color=red][font=宋体]具体的次数其实就是[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]details,[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]大家记住o[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]nce or twice[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]绝对比[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]several times[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]好很多[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]这样才可以体现出你文章的[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]specific,[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]不要认为这些小的地方可以忽视[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]其实在文章中注意细节[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]是可以[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]make a difference[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]的[/font][/color][font=Times New Roman][color=red]!) [/color][color=black]to visit the theatre as a special treat[/color][color=red]([/color][/font][color=red][font=宋体]特殊待遇[/font][/color][font=Times New Roman][color=red])[/color][color=black]. For them this is a major operation which involves[/color][color=red](involve[/color][/font][color=red][font=宋体]这个词大家都知道[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]却不常用[/font][/color][font=Times New Roman][color=red]) [/color][color=black]considerable[/color][color=red](elaborate[/color][/font][color=red][font=宋体]也不错[/font][/color][font=Times New Roman][color=red])[/color][color=black] planning. As the play draws to its close[/color][color=red](draw to its close,[/color][/font][color=red][font=宋体]接近的意思[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]避免了过于大众的[/font][/color][font=Times New Roman][color=red]come to the end)[/color][color=black], they wonder[/color][color=red](wonder[/color][/font][color=red][font=宋体]也是一个建议多用的词汇[/font][/color][font=Times New Roman][color=red])[/color][color=black] whether they will ever catch that last train home. The city dweller never experiences[/color][color=red](experience, undergo[/color][/font][color=red][font=宋体]和[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]suffer[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]两个词汇最好是有机会就用[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]没有机会创造机会用[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],ATTENTION: undergo, suffer[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]是经历不好的事[/font][/color][font=Times New Roman][color=red])[/color][color=black] anxieties of this sort[/color][color=red]([/color][/font][color=red][font=宋体]没有出现[/font][/color][font=Times New Roman][color=red]kind)[/color][color=black]. The latest exhibitions, films, or plays are only a short bus ride away[/color][color=red](a short bus ride away,[/color][/font][color=red][font=宋体]用具体的描写替代了[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]nearby[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]这个概念[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]这是大家应该学习的[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]以后形容近就可以说[/font][/color][font=Times New Roman][color=red]:A is only a couple of minutes walk away)[/color][color=black]. Shopping, too, is always a pleasure. There is so much variety that you never have to make do with[/color][color=red](make do with,[/color][/font][color=red][font=宋体]相信这是大家几乎没有听说过的用法[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]就是凑合着用的意思[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]和有用的用法[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]你可以写[/font][/color][font=Times New Roman][color=red]:Via the help of B, one will never have to make do with XXX) [/color][color=black]second best. Country people run wild[/color][color=red](run wild[/color][/font][color=red][font=宋体]是使用避免了[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]crazily[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]这个干瘪的词[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]如果你能够用[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]frantically[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]当然也很好[/font][/color][/size][font=Times New Roman][color=red][size=3])[/size][/color][color=black]
[size=3]    [u]when they go shopping in the city and stagger home loaded with as many of the exotic items as they can carry[/u][/size][/color][u][color=red][size=3](OMG,[/size][/color][/u][/font][size=3][u][color=red][font=宋体]这个句子很具体的写出了乡村人的不幸[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][/u][u][color=red][font=宋体]作者用了[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]stagger[/font][/color][/u][u][color=red][font=宋体]蹒跚[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],loaded with[/font][/color][/u][u][color=red][font=宋体]装载[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],as many as they can[/font][/color][/u][u][color=red][font=宋体]多[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman], exotic items[/font][/color][/u][u][color=red][font=宋体]外来物品[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],4[/font][/color][/u][u][color=red][font=宋体]个概念组成了一幅农民进城的生动画面[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][/u][u][color=red][font=宋体]阅卷人就喜欢这样的有[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]details<details[/font][/color][/u][u][color=red][font=宋体]在[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]TOEFL[/font][/color][/u][u][color=red][font=宋体]考试中其实是很重要的一个东西[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][/u][u][color=red][font=宋体]简直是[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]crucia>)[/font][/color][/u][u][color=red][font=宋体]句子[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][/u][u][color=red][font=宋体]以后大家想要形象的描写一个东西就可以按照这个句子的模式来些[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman])[/font][/color][/u][font=Times New Roman][color=black]. Nor is the city without its moments of beauty[/color][color=red]([/color][/font][color=red][font=宋体]双重否定表肯定[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]用这样的句子就可以显示出你的语言功底[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]同时要提醒的是[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]moments of xxx[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]这个用法是要一有机会就用的[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]比如你先说[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]B[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]有什么不好[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]再说[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]A[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]很好[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]你就说[/font][/color][font=Times New Roman][color=red]Nor is A without its moments of XXX)[/color][color=black]. There is something comforting about the warm glow shed by advertisements on cold wet winter nights. Few things could be more impressive than the peace that descends on deserted city streets at weekends when the thousands that travel to work every day are tucked away in their homes in the country[/color][color=red]([/color][/font][color=red][font=宋体]这个句子你很可能一掠而过[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]但是这里的结构同样是值得学习的[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]: Few things could be more impressive than A[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]其实就是[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman]A is more impressive than many things,[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]但是这里一个小小的替换就避免了简单的称述句[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]这是那些句子很单一的同学们应该好好学习的[/font][/color][font=Times New Roman][color=red])[/color][color=black]. It has always been a mystery to me who city dwellers, who appreciate all these things, obstinately pretend that they would prefer to live in the country[/color][color=red]([/color][/font][color=red][font=宋体]漂亮的收尾[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]没有反对的词汇[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]却表示出了反对的意思[/font][/color][color=red][font=Times New Roman],[/font][/color][color=red][font=宋体]这也是结尾的一个很好的模版[/font][/color][/size][color=red][font=Times New Roman][size=3]).[/size]
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[[i] 本帖最后由 royi 于 2008-2-29 11:47 编辑 [/i]]

Illusions of pastoral peace 这课我背过，谢谢楼主点拨！
感谢感谢！！！！！

谢谢LZ的分享!!!

谢谢LZ的转帖了~~~

谢谢LZ分享。的确很不错

仔细看过每一点后，受益匪浅。


so，顶！！！！！:D

好东西啊 谢谢lz

好东西，谢谢楼主:handshake 。 但不能另存啊:'( ，27日起发现不能粘贴，也不能另存，是怎么回事啊？盼各位学友指点，每次在线看很不方便:L

[[i] 本帖最后由 guanerjia 于 2008-2-29 12:34 编辑 [/i]]

[quote]原帖由 [i]guanerjia[/i] 于 2008-2-29 12:32 发表 [url=http://www.xiaomaguohe.net/bbs/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=111474&ptid=4347][img]http://www.xiaomaguohe.net/bbs/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]
但不能另存啊:'( ，27日起发现不能粘贴，也不能另存

是不能另存了 我截屏弄下来的 很不方便啊

Good Way!

受益非浅~谢谢!:P

:victory:  谢谢ＬＺ，我正需要这个！

很好的分析，很好的模板啊

这。。。。相当受益！！！:lol

感谢你！感谢小马！哎！小马这么好的地方，我早点发现该多好啊！

美女    很很强

我肯定   六级 考过    太熟悉的文章

我申大学的时候其中一篇essay就是模仿这个写的～扑哧～

谢谢了，十分受用

hehe 受益！！ 谢谢

:)       谢谢，，

  我还有个问题   是不是  小作文的 摸板 最好不要写的太冗长？