兄弟姐妹们帮忙批下作文~ 不胜感激~
第一次写 是topic9的 （在大城市住还是小城镇住）
希望大家能给我评价一下 给些建议~谢谢
Whether people should live ina small town or ina big city, various people have entirely distinct perspectives due to their different experences. As for me ,I strongly agree with the oipinion that people should live in a small town.And there ate asubstantial amount ofreasons , which can easily found , but the followings are sufficient.
First and foremost, it is acknowleged that there is less pollution and noise in a small town than in a big city.I prefer to close the nature,such as walking in the yard, relaxing on a cozy bench and do exercises putside by breathing the fresh air.If I live in a city ,I will not do this things which is beneficial for me. Moreover ,there are birds' singings intead of cars and lorries ' noise. Only in this circumstances ,can Irelax and have a good dream . In short ,it is a healthy way of life that people live in a small town .
In addition, ther are beatiful and charming natrwal viw\ews ,wi\hich can make people release their stress,in a small town .whenever I want to have a good time in order to relax, I can have more choice to choose. For instances, I can clime the hill with my friends. With my family members , I also can fish and have a clinic beside the river .Consequently, it is a joy of life that one lives in a small town .
Last but not least,every coin has two sides . Living in the small town would present me some troubles ,which need not be take serious .The most trouble is the unconveniece traffic,which can cause the difficulty in calling at friends and having a journey.
In conclution, my favor goes to the opinions that the best choice is living in the small town . Although it may bing a little unconveniences,it would present me a peaceful ,quiet , clean place to live .Therefore , I believe that the comfortiable way of life is living in the small town.
