老师，作文题以后都不放了是吗？

是啊,我就靠这个练手呢啊~~~看来都太忙了~~~唉

老师们也很忙呵
我们自己写了放上来吧~~

不是还是会继续发放, 只是如何发放作文我们还在调整,我们打算让大家都参与进来, 现在还是看的人多, 写的人少, 改的人更少,  我的网这两天断了刚恢复, 估计新的通告马上就下来了,  sophie的网晚上慢, 大家的留言可能她都要白天挤时间恢复, 大家耐心等待

wait Sophie~

[ 本帖最后由 Seabiscuit 于 2008-4-1 19:22 编辑 ]

Thanks for all your supporting. I'm moved..
Several days ago there was one problem with my computer.
The new notice and topic for this week will be post on this Thursday according the decision of our xiaoma managerial levels. Please wait and practice all the time.

好的呵  
辛苦了哈~~~~~

Land problem is currently of great concern to the nation, to the world and to all the human beings. Because of the scarcity of the land, it is a difficult issue for a city to decide whether they should destroy the historic buildings and replace them with modern buildings or not. From my personal angle alone, we must selectively preserve our old, historic buildings which represent our countries’ cultures and histories.
    On one hand, historic building is a manifestation of national cultural heritage. Take the Forbidden City in Beijing as an example; it is the palace where emperor lives. It recorded history over hundreds of years of China. One foreign friend of mine said after he visited the Forbidden City he could feel the flavor of the ancients, see the life style of ancients and know more deep culture of China. If the Forbidden City is destroyed and we can just see it from the book or internet, we will never know how grand it is and how stately it is.
    On the other hand, there are more and more tourists these years and historic building is a most important part in our tourism. For example, growth in the number of the tourists who came to China and visited the Great Wall has tripled over the last year which makes a tremendous contribution to the tourism. If we destroy these historic buildings the tourism must be influence and it will be a pity for all the people who can’t see these constructions.
    But not all of the historic buildings are as important as those above. Some historic buildings which have no representations can be destroyed by the city, for we can use the land to do a lot of things to improve our living standards.
    In conclusion, though some historic buildings can be replaced by the modern buildings, the most important constructions which are the crystal of the wisdom of our ancestor and which represents the culture of our countries must be protected. We must find a point of balance between preserving the historic buildings and building new modern buildings

waiting~~~

起来之后睡不着了，昨天被拒的非常不爽。。我也来一篇 ＝ ＝。。  
 I grew up in Beijing, a beautiful ancient city of more than a thousand years.  I love it.  Over the thousand years it has accumulated a unique culture and landscape.  There are antique buildings around every corner; there are world famous historic structures scattered all over the city.      

The Forbidden City tells you how powerful the empire once was.  The Great Wall, snaking several thousand miles across the mountains for tens of centuries, tells the stories of the soldiers defending their country and people day and night in the snow and ice generation after generation.  I was singly lucky to be born in this city.  I spent my childhood wandering around this amazing city like in a wonderland.    

Recently, something threaten to strip the city of its beauty, and more. That is the environmental problem which caused by the modern buildings and automobiles. Spring is a time when Beijing is at its peak of beauty, with the trees sprouting and the birds chirping.  Yet now it is the season of air pollution. The release of large amounts of carbon dioxides by the modern industries in the form of Global warming endangered people's health, conspicuously, balefully.       

The unreasonable seeking for new land lead to modern buildings put into the wrong place. April 17th of last year saw 300,000 tons of sand and dirt dumped on this ancient city overnight. The storm blanketed the whole city.  Every centimeter of the city was covered with a couple of centimeters of dirt.  Everyone had to stay inside to breathe.       

Today Beijing has turned itself from a historic site into an urban place, and we have to admit that modern buildings are the basic requirement for the development of Technology. If the environment protection has been borne in mind, we will protect our land unconsciously or subconsciously, and once again, this city will be my wonderland.   


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[ 本帖最后由 TOEFL759_198 于 2008-4-2 05:37 编辑 ]