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拙作~欢迎大家指教呵~~狂拍吧

本主题由 heqiongsophie 于 2008-4-5 01:30 设置高亮

拙作~欢迎大家指教呵~~狂拍吧

20 年后人们的闲暇时间更多吗?
Do you walk with your family after supper everyday? Do you go picnic with your friends on a sunny weekend? Do you have your free time to do the things with your pleasure, like reading or writing? Consider the aspects above, we can definite what is leisure time in our life!

From where I stand, I cling to that people who live twenty years later will own less leisure time than today. First and foremost, with the rapidly development of technology, the pace of people's life is relevant increased, work as mountain load on people's shoulders, the exceeding pressure are surrounding in people's daily life. Hardly can I imagine how they can enjoy their leisure time under all these circumstance above! Just take my family as an illustration, when I was a child, we enjoying our leisure time for picnic in the park, meaningful exhibition in museums, funny and exciting films in theater. As my parents become busy on work, scarcely we spend our time together just after several years. Moreover, the technology is constantly developing, What is the people's situation and leisure time will being twenty years later?

Further more, Confucius, one of the greatest philosopher in china, convinced that " People's desire are endless". Indeed, among the highly development world, there are countless shining, charming, fascinating things that we desirable, but our energy is limited, our time is no more than 24 hours a day. How can we distribute our rarely life into endless desiring world? Many people today are put their effort into achieving the power, wealth, reputation, and so on, that results in their leisure time are been extremely erosion, even their life become aimless busy. It is no doubt that more temptation will occur in later twenty years, so, what will happen to them?

Admittedly, the highly developed technology may bring about some positive effect to people's leisure time. Such as the increasing efficiency during their work, and industrialization made it possible to produce large amount s of products at the same time, even the applying of robot will play a vita part in daily life which will save people much time of housework. However, as technology's merits to leisure time than its disadvantages, I will still reinforce my stand point of people will have less leisure time after twenty years.

大家多多拍呵  谢了~~~~
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今天比昨天好不就是希望吗?

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很有意思的题目~
Where there is a will, there is a way.
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I really glad to see your words
you have a lot to do~~~
独上高楼,望尽天涯路!
                                   -------牛

今天比昨天好不就是希望吗?

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