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1.This is a controversial issue about why people attend college or university. Depend on
personal experience, personality type and emotional concern, we may find that some people
will choose to find a job after graduated from high school; On the other hand , most of the
graduated students will take the opportunity to attend colleges or universities before
finding jobs. So that they can obtain more choices, higher salaries, and more opportunities
for advancement in an increasing competitive job market.
The essential reason can be seen by everyone is that employers are willing to pay a premium
for highly qualified applicants. For instance, many companies desire employees who can speak
more than one language and offer higher salaries to attract them. Even if there are two
person who have the same standardized test scores, one has a college degree, while the other
one has not a college degree. As far as I am concerned, the company will surely choose the
applicant with a college degree. So you can see, college graduates are not only receive more
job offers, they can also get a higher salaries and position than applicants who lack
college diplomas.
In addition, before attending college, students have a limited opportunity to study the
subjects they like. But in colleges, students can study whatever they want. They can choose
many interesting classes that they can not attend in high school. Besides of study, they also
have new option of various communities. In college communities, you not only can take part
in many amazing activities, you also can learn much scientific knowledge that you will never
know in class.
Last but not the least, there are much more new students from different places will appear
in colleges than in high schools. So you can obtain many new friends in a totally new field.
There you can learn from each other, you will learn much new information from different
people. Through this, your view will be widely expanded. You will become more and more
competitive in your personal life.
In conclusion, there are many advantages for people attending college.
2.
This is a controversial issue about whether knowledge gained from books is more important
than that gained from experience. Depending on personal experience , personality type and
emotional concern, we may find out that some people hold the idea that the knowledge from
books is more important , on the other hand , some people might vote for the knowledge from
experience. The choice , nevertheless , is not so easy to make. However, from my point of
view, it is rather superficial to simply say which one is more important. My argument is
listed as follows.
The essential reason of my propensity for that knowledge from books is more important is
that reading books can save us a lot of time while gaining knowledge from experience needs a
large amount of time. For instance, when we learn to cook, we have no time to cook every
dishes that we want to prepare just before the dinner. However, the books of cooking skills
offer us a great help. we can learn the cooking skills easily without spending much time to
do some experiments on every dishes. So as far as I concerned, books is more important.
Another reason can be seen by everyone is that we can go over books so many many times that
we can learn the knowledge more comprehensively and deeply. For instance, when we attended
some excellent lecture of some famous professor, we could hardly obtain all the information
and knowledge through the experience at once. We have to read the books written by the
professor some times to gain the knowledge that we might missed in our experience. In short,
even though , there are many different views concerning this topic, in this part, I also
would like to vote for books.
On the other hand, the books is not always more important than experience. Just as some
knowledge only can be obtained through experience. Take learning to swim for example, when
we try to learn to swim, merely depending on a hand book of swimming skills is useless. We
have to jump into the swimming pool and gain the knowledge that we want to know. Taking this
factor and facing the fact, to be frank, I would like to say that experience is more
important sometimes.
In conclusion, given those sagacious reasons which are discussed above, I will sill hold the
idea that we have to use books and experience together to get the knowledge we want to know.
3.
This is a controversial issue concerning whether it is good to build a large factory near my
community. Depending on personal experience , personality type and emotional concern, we may
find that some people may hold the idea of supporting the factory , on the other hand , some
people might oppose building this factory. The choice , nevertheless , is easy to make.
However, from my point of view, I will agree that the former one is more reasonable. For
supporting a factory is more advisable than opposing it, my arguments are listed as follows.
The essential reason can be found by everyone is that a new factory can provide many new
jobs for the people who want to find a job in our community. For instance, people in my
district live hand to mouth. A good job which can offer them a regular salaries is very
important to them. It means that they will have no need to work in the rice fields and can go
to work in the new factory every day instead. In short, even though there are many different
views concerning this topic, in my part, I also would like to vote for the new factory.
Another reason of my propensity for supporting the factory is that building a new factory
can accelerate the economic in our district. For instance, in the past, there are few retail
shops and restaurants near our community, it is very inconvenient to buy something for daily
use. So after the factory is built, it can also bring many attachment shops and restaurants.
Through this, the factory can not only accelerate our economics, it also can improve our
daily life. As far as I concerned, a new factory is a wise choice.
Last but not the least, the new factory can produce a large amount of tax for the
government. For this, the government will use this part of tax money to improve and
provide more advanced and more convenient service for our community, and the whole society
stands to benefit.
Although I agree that there may be a couple of disadvantages of building a new factory in
the community, I feel that the advantages are more obvious, such as a lot of new jobs, more
convenient traffic and the sharply developing economics. Taking account of all these factors
and recognizing the fact, to be frank, I would choose the new factory as my best choice.
In conclusion, it is good to build a new factory near my community. To sum up , given those
sagacious reasons which are discussed above, I strongly commit to the notion that a new
factory can bring our community more advantages than disadvantages.
4.
This is a controversial issue concerning whether the change that food has become easier to
prepare improved the way people live. Depending on personal experience, personality type and
emotional concern, we may find that some people hold the idea that the change of food did
not improve our life; On the other hand , some people might think that this change has
brought much convenience to their life. The choice , nevertheless , is not easy to make.
However, from my point of view, I will agree that the change of food preparing has improved
our life a lot is more reasonable. My argument is listed as follows.
The essential reason can be seen by everyone is that the easier way of preparing food has
saved us a lot of time. In the past, we must spend a large amount of time on preparing
everyday food. However, it always seems that the more time we spent the worse the food would
become. So this is why many mums and wives think that preparing food is the most hard job
to deal. For instance, when I was in high school, my mum had to spend a lot of time to
prepare different sorts of delicious food for me. And it would take all her free time to
learn the complicate ways of preparing food. In short, even though there are many different
views concerning this topic, in my part I would like to vote for the easier way of
preparing food.
Another reason of my propensity for my agreement is that the easier way of preparing food
has made men glad to prepare food today. For instance, it is not difficult to imagine a wife
comes home after a day's hard work and how delightful she is to find out his husband has
already prepared several her favorite dishes for her. So as far as I concern, this kind of
change improved the way we live in certain parts.
Last but not the least, easier food makes us more healthy. In modern time, there are more
and more people who do not have any breakfast in the morning for many different sorts of
reason. The main reason, however, must be that it is too difficult to prepare a healthy and
delicious breakfast. A hardworking day without a breakfast can damage our body health and
even bring us a lot of disease. Anyway, easier way of preparing a breakfast make it
possible for us to have breakfast every single day. And it can always keep us healthy.
In conclusion, the easier way of preparing food virtually has improved the way we live a
lot. To sum up, given those sagacious reasons which are discussed above, I strongly
commit the notion that the change that food preparing become easier has brought us a lot of
convenience and it will offer us more and more help in the future.
5.
This is a controversial issue about whether parents are the best teachers. Depending on
personal experience,
personality type and emotional concern, we may find that some people
hold the idea that parents are the best teachers; ON the other hand, some people might
choose that parents are not the best teachers instead. The choice, nevertheless, is not so
easy to make. However, from my point of view, it is not completely true to say that parents
are the best teachers. My arguments are listed as follows.
The essential reason can be seen by everyone is that not all parents are good teachers. As
normal individuals, some parents more or less have some bad habits. Even though parents
always devote themselves to the education of their children, the outcome might turn out to
be disappointment. For instance, many parents have the habit of smoking. All children tend
to copy everything including bad ones from their parents. So they might learn to smoke
quickly too. As you can see, this is not only a bad habit learned from parents, it is also
bad to children's healthy. In short , even though there are many different ideas concerning
this topic, in my part , I would like to say that not all parents are good teachers.
Another reason of my propensity for that not all parents are the best teachers is that
parents can not always be the best ones. As children are growing up, parents are getting
older at the same time, time is changing quickly, parents can not always make correct
choice according to their old views. So they can not always tell their children what is true
or what is false. For instance,
In my living area, many parents only have a degree of middle
school, they are poor in solving math problems, but their children have attended into
college, how could this kind of parents be the best teachers of their children. So as far as
I concerned , parents can not always be the best parents.
However I concede that there are many parents who have done a good job of being the best
teachers of their children, and parents may , nevertheless, help their children more than
good teachers. Indeed, most parts of education are beyond teachers' reaches. It is parents
that supplement. Psychology studies have shown us that parents' love sometimes has
astonishingly magic power to their children. Albert Einstein's mother and Forest Gump's
parents are good examples for this part. Taking this factor and recognizing the fact, I
think parents can be good teachers.
In conclusion, it is superficial to simply say that parents are the best teachers.
