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作文批改制度重申

本主题由 qifeihu 于 2008-5-14 23:43 提升

作文批改制度重申

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写作版的作文互评将继续开展,我们再次重申,5(通常情况下)每周四发放作文题。大家随时发作文上来都可以,但必须发在同一个贴内,这样我们好编辑。
其中星期五,六,日为会员之间互评时间,到下星期一,二,三版主和学生会参与批改。到周四再发新题。
目的是增进会员之间交流和把练习的作文精炼。希望每次大家能限时来写作。

[ 本帖最后由 heqiongsophie 于 2008-5-2 00:51 编辑 ]
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请各位小马注意了

你们应该看过了是否支持作文互评的讨论贴:当你们每次发作文上来,应当首先
have an awareness----应该先去积极主动的给别人批改作文,不会改没有关系,哪怕指出对方一个词用的不妥,一个句子你没读懂,或者三两句读后点评都可以,关键是你参与了互改的过程,而不是只发上来自己的作文,永远等着别人给你改。

有的会员抱怨他的作文没人改,对于这些我们没能批改的作文贴我们表示道歉,但同时首先我想问的是---你是否按照互改规则先给别人改了呢?看了前几次发放的作文贴谁遵守我们的互改作文规则,谁很积极帮助别人改作文,大家都可以看到。所以我们的工作是一项team work,这不仅在我们托福的作文版中,在你现在或未来的生活中你都要经历的。Right and responsibility go hand in hand. 你享有别人给改你作文的权利同时也当履行你给别人改作文的义务。我们不仅需要你积极的提交作文,而且更需要你们遵守规则积极主动的也帮别人看作文改作文。

[ 本帖最后由 heqiongsophie 于 2008-4-21 11:41 编辑 ]
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free of charge
You can apply if you are preparing for Toefl.
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question

作文直接贴到这就行?

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贴到每周发放作文的贴上
如3月24日,3月26日,4月3日发放的作文贴上,谢谢!
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跃跃欲试...

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那是不是只能写发放的固定作文题?

自己练的其它topic呢,不能发了?

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可以发,但是我们批改的精力肯定放在每次的assignment上。
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作文一篇,猛拍别客气~~
Agree or not: If people want to have a good future, they should have a careful plan while they are still young.
     For most of the time, we are always on the arduous journey in seeking for a good and successful future, for it plays a essential role on our whole life, and actually, most of us have try our best to do it. However, when facing to this really tremendous journey, there exist sorts of methods on it.
   
To be honest, coincident with success, according to the experience of the former, is a plan which applies for devoting energy on it severely when people are still young.

It is a hard and long way to a good future that needs a plentiful design to control a number of confusing conditions. We must to encounter such a great of troubles which is beyond our prediction frequently, thus an abundant and sufficient plan for the future cannot be avoided, especially follows that situation. A good example of this is the CEO of a family company. Careful planning is a requisite part of his daily work, especially when his decisions could impact his own and others’ life in a significant way. Maybe a miscalculation on his part will incur huge losses. After all, not only does his decision influence himself, but also affect other employees working for him.

What is more substantial, the young prove to either enable to create, or be more enthusiastic than another else. For instance, people start to learn a foreign language in teenager, and a market firm always admits a young man as seller in the business for this good reason. They have ability to acquire new trends quickly, not forget old ones, and vivid passion for coming. As a consequence, creative plans will be formed, for they are open to new movements and tendency. If there is one thing young people cannot do, I do not know who can. It is authentic for people to prepare when one is young.

All the evidence justifies a sound view that people ought to be ready for one’s future as young, because their creative and straitened circumstances on the road.


听从小H版的话,转过来~~

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