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When and where in the past do you want to go?
Sometimes we will stay in the memories of the past, some of them are exciting, but others may be unhappy. I have walked many roads and experienced a lot, that enable me to be a mature man. Most of the roads that I have walked left me a good past time and I will never forget them. However, if I am allowed to return to the past that I can choose, I will choose my graduate period, when I have studied in Sichuan University that I often have a dream to go back.
Firstly, in my graduate period I have participated in several scientific research projects, which were complex and full of challenging. I have learned much knowledge from involving in these projects, for example, after finished the projects I have mastered at some basic theory and research methods to scientific project, and I have known well about specialty knowledge and also accumulated work experience. At the mean time, there are almost all kinds of sports equipment and many sports venues, such as soccer pitch, basketball court, as well as swimming pools and other gyms, which provide a great place to exercise body. Especially the swimming pools that I have often come for swimming, because I think it will exercise physical body more effectively and systematically.
In addition, In Sichuan University I have recognized my professor Li, a scientist in mechanical field, who had a good authority in academics. He has given me many helps and taught me lots of knowledge that benefit me greatly forever, not only in my study but also in my life, so he is the most respected teacher that I have met. At the same time, I have made many friends in the campus, and we have usually participated in the various activities together, for example, I have often played card with my friends on some weekend, and they have left me much happy laughter. Last but not the least, now I am very tired after everyday’s work and I have no enough time to do other interesting things, while I felt quite relax and very free in the campus so that I can manage my time more effectively and will have more time to study English.
From the above opinion I concluded, if I could go back to a certain and place in the past, I will choose to go to Sichuan University at my graduate period, and I would probably enjoy it.
PS:第一篇文章, 写的不理想,请多提出问题和解决方法,非常感谢!
