嘿嘿，这样互批真好，又学到很多东西呢。

明白了，之前还觉得都可以呢。
谢谢啦！

可以在refers to 前加when it。我也不太确定哈~

en 这样互相学习进步

前几天出去玩了，没帮大家拍，堕落啊

看小小蝎同学很热情帮大家改真的很感动，也帮你拍拍吧，不过偶的水平有限就是了

你结构perfect，非常清晰，开头也很attractive，所以以偶的水平就只能帮你改改语言点了，见谅哈

The most consequent point of my penchant for living in a slower pace is that I can finish my projects better. 这句应该是cannot吧，不过估计是笔误

Furthermore, the detrimental effects of the quick pace of life style upon the physiological and mental state of people have loomed so large.这里的loom和so large 是不是有点矛盾呢

不过还是非常欣赏的你文章，要是偶也有这个水平就好了

还有你说偶的第一个支持段明显多于第二个支持段，是因为第一段原来写的太少了，后面加了点，结果又多了，哎，没办法，菜啊，谢谢你的建议下次一定改，有空帮偶看看语言吧3x

Before I tended to hurry in my reading so that I hardly understand the passages deeply. 这句应该吧before去掉

有空接着帮别人拍，呵呵

整体写的还是挺好的，但是我觉得第二个原因应该再有点更具体的例子。
既然，最后作者的观点是喜欢slower life所以还是应该强调一下吧。。
比如，加个什么两个地区比较的例子。应该会充实一点。。。
冷静的头脑可以是：level headed或者keep a cool head
个人拙见

。。。说句实话。。。。希望yoyo不要生气：我看的时候感觉好困难啊。。。
主要是我本身语法就一般。。yoyo写了好多复杂的句子，我都开始分析长难句了
13#说的挺全的了，我还没找出这么多。。
有一点觉得用rhythm说生活节奏或者速度，有点奇怪。。。
第二段的前两句衔接有点生硬。。我觉得第二句可以改成：
I could feel my life is such that when I walk alone a street, being aware of flowers aside a street, songs of birds in a tree, enjoyable breeze and warm sunshine that will refresh us and be beneficial to our body.
同13楼，建议楼主写一些逻辑明了的句子，或者说不要弄这么多从句和并列结构，句式多样可以分别用在多个句子中。。。另外就是句间衔接能再顺畅一点

个人拙见

像那种agree or disagree和这个二选一个这种题目开头都可以some people feel.....others....
这样子吧？
还有就是观点鲜明的支持一方应该比较好吧？（ps个人也不太擅长写中立的）

现在在交是不是有点晚了，5月3号就考试了，急呀
The answer to this question differs from individual to individual. With the rapid development of society, people often change their attitude of same topic. Some people may prefer one to another though some have on opinion. Before rendering my opinion, I consider it is necessary to take a glance at argument of the both sides.

Some people prefer doing things in a hurry because of obvious reason that doing thing quickly can save much time to do other things. Because we should study more knowledge and get more information in order to keep pace with the rapid society. More and more people complain that they have not enough time to more things. Therefore, time become more valuable thing.

As a proverb goes:” every coins have its two sides”. Although doing thing quickly sounds reasonable, it is rushed conclusion if you consider the answer from different perspectives. For example, people always want to get correct answer, but reckless answer. Doing things slowly can avoid the mistakes. Hence, that doing thing quickly is always better choice is not supported by sound reasons. Further, taking one’s time to do something, unfortunately, often is underestimated. There are many reason why some people like to take their time to do things, I will explain some important ones.

The main reason is that doing things quickly may lead to make some mistakes. Because we are human, it is impossible for people to avoid mistake if we do thing very quick. Doing think quickly is not good habit for people, especially for young people, who have less experience. They would feel happy when they have finished the work, no matter how many mistakes they made.   

The other reason is that some things should be done slowly. For example, when we do some experiment of chemistry, we must spend enough time to wait for the result of experiment; scientist also must spend more time to understand deeply why it happened and what the theory is..


To sum up, though I admit maybe doing thing has some advantages, I still think the disadvantages of doing thing quickly are more obvious. If all the factors are complied, we can safely draw conclusion that doing thing slowly is wise decision.