Do you agree or disagree: People can learn more from watching television than reading books.
用教主的方法破题

用
(2+1)-1 法  让步     随便挑几个原因 1
电视 形象 生动    但不让思考
2 reading
提高IQ 深邃    思考
3
书本 专业化 强


结语 books are 进步阶梯

          There is a controversially debate on whether people can learn more from watching television than reading books. Obviously ,consisted with that people can learn more from watching television are those people who hold the opinion that watching television makes learning become easier and more available From my point of view, considerable though the advantages that watching television for study enjoys are , they can not compete with benefits that reading books brings about , when disadvantage of watching TV and the contribution of reading books are taken into deliberation.
           First of all, some minor advantages of watching TV for study enjoys include vivid pictures and no requirement for some background knowledge . For instance , my grandmother is a illiterate because she didn’t have a chance to receive education ,but it isn’t difficulty for her to get involved in the situation in entertainment programmes and even to know some global events on CCTV one . On the other hand , an afficiency of watching TV is rather obvious .As is evidenced in findings released by healthy magazine, people would stay unthinking stage when they enjoy the programmes . if too often people face the screen , the amount of nervous cell will dramatically decrease . In short , watching TV might do some harm to our body rather than teach us more things .
               Fortunately , reading may improve our IQ and EQ rather than killing our nervous cell. A recent investigation conducted by the human organization demonstrates that more than eighty percent of knowledge is achieved from books , and reading contributes a lot to society civilization . At the same time , reading book make us thinking deeper into essence which the author often conceal with some simple phenomena such as Tom uncle’s Cabin .The more people think , the more they get . So there is on doubt that reading is the key to development of society .
             Another advantage that reading books brings about is that reading gets more specialized knowledge than does watching TV .For example , college students almost get specialized knowledge through reading one or more filed books and journals , not watching TV . Conversely, If colleges merely provide many cinemas in stead of libraries, just imagine what a horrible thing can occur ? and how do students deal with some specialized matters? So only in the means of reading can we become specialist in some field which we are really interesting in .
               Although I agree that there may be a couple of advantages of watching TV for study , I maintain that its advantages means nothing when its disadvantages is mentioned , while the benefits that reading books causes is far more obvious . Just as Gorki said, book is the stepping stone of the development of human kind. Not one can deny the contribution of reading
books in the human history and the more people can absorb from reading rather than watching TV
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[ 本帖最后由 走聪明 于 2008-4-27 16:24 编辑 ]

Do u agree or disagree: Because people are busy with doing so many things, they can do few things well?

如何破题  不太会破这种题   大家请教了     关键词they
不然会跑题（戴云说的）

   开头（废话一下  然后明确自己观点）   让步一下 某些人可能是强人（算了, 不让了）


也是随便挑的1
没有精力
，  没精力 怎么能做好事

lake of energy
distract your 精力
2
复杂会混淆

混淆会把事情mess 掉

too complex
confuse themselves

3 损坏身体健康    （比较牵强  用黄二随便挑的）

do harm to physical and mental health
may be crazy 掉

总结上文   结语一下

         Whether people can do few things well if they are busy with doing so many things , different people will have different ideas due to their own experience . As for me I strongly agree with this idea and the reasons are as follows.
             Firstly, to do so many things at the same time will distract their energy and attention, so how can they do any thing well with limited power and time ? as is evidenced in findings released by healthy magazine, there might be more possibilities of making errors when people feel tired in the work , especially in airplane company . The airplane companies have a set of working rules which mainly limit the working hour of every crew . because a lot of accidents are caused by careless due to fatigue of crews. So it is impossible for people to handle and deal with every thing well at the same time.
          Secondly, many things needed to cope with instimulately will disrupt the normal orders of mind and life of people. As the old saying goes , the better schedule we have , the more achievements we will enjoy. Some people ,however ,ignore this rule of life. they hold that the potential of human are so great that one man can control many things at the same time . My cousin Jim, for example, always regard himself as superior man . and he took eight courses in a semester when he was junior at college . but unfortunately he got 8 D at final exams because he confuse some concepts among this courses .In short, to deal with so many thing at limited time is too complex a task for human./
       Last but not least, too often busy with doing so many things , nobody could keep sound health including both physical and mental aspects. According to a new latest scientific record , it is rather suitable for human work seven hours and two matters at most every day , which means that working on so many things will do harm to our physical and mental health , and even cause psychological problem .Therefore it is not reality for people to have sound building to operate more things for a long time .
         In conclusion, people might not do anything well if they instimulately deal with so many things from the above prospective. People’s energy , time and attention are limited , while there are countless matters needed to cope with every day. Considering health and the efficiency of work , people should make a detailed plan for fairs that should be done everyday .

[ 本帖最后由 走聪明 于 2008-4-27 18:19 编辑 ]

又占   

好了  够了

The ability to cooperate well with others is more important today than in the past, agree or disagree?
如何破题              这题我不会

[ 本帖最后由 走聪明 于 2008-4-27 18:37 编辑 ]

明天我来看。

怎么没来啊

Conclusion:
中心思想还可以深入展开阐述，不需要被模板所左右。
有些例子和支持段落还需修改，使其更有说服力。
语言注意多样性，并不需要一味追求长句复杂句，这样容易犯语法错误。可以适当改变句型。另外就是有些小的语法错误，望仔细查看，做出修正。

           我等你

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