独立写作求拍
今天写了4篇作文，选了一片自认为最难写的贴上来，主要感觉话题太生活化了，写出来写不出托福的感觉。
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, S& {8 M7 {- k4 V5 [2 b3 j5 R32 Is it better to enjoy your money when you earn it or is it better to save your money for some time in the future? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
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. O4 Z/ H: @4 e* N1 \As far as I am concerned, though immediate needs for daily necessities should be fulfilled, it is important to save up enough money for sometime in the future when money can make a difference between life and death or wealth and poverty! k, w7 b6 s" ?" S
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The first and foremost reason that I am in favor of money for future use is that it may keep us prepared for the future to pay for expected expenditures, that contribute to personal improvement, such as education. For instance, responsible parents or a teenager with a plan for his future will consciously save up adequate amount of money for education which includes tuition, transportation and housing expenses, often exorbitantly high. In this case, unless money is accumulated purposely, hardly anyone has the chance to further his study in college especially overseas. Luckily education fees are regular expenses that we can predict in advance and make a good financial preparation. |, Q# t M3 O4 T
: G# l1 k& C( a' NApart from the expected cost, it is more important to save up my regular income for those unexpected ones, such as a treatment after a car accident. Sometimes, disasters come without warning and if I am well prepared financially, I might overcome those tough periods with ease. Just consider that one day you are suddenly diagnosed with cancer, and the radioactive treatment requires millions of dollars which is beyond your means if you just spend up all the money immediately. In this case, saving money or not means the difference between life and death. How can anyone undervalue the importance of saving money if he is confronted with such situation of accidental needs for money?
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Furthermore, saving a large amount of money will enable me to better enjoy my life in my leisure time. Imagine with 30 dollars each month, I can only go to a theater. However, if I save up for two years, time makes a difference because with all those money I might be able to travel abroad, to see all those tourist attractions that I dream of, such as Eiffel Tower, the Statue of liberty. I may even spend my summer vacation in Maldives to savor the beauty of nature, which will help me to relieve stress and pressure, and most importantly refresh myself for future challenges. In other words, saving little money everyday can mean a big vacation or enjoyment in the coming future.
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In sum, I believe it is wiser to save up the money in the long run which can be used for paying regular expenses or life of better quality as well as accidents.
