Does easier-prepared food improve the way people live
While many who maintain the view that the easier-prepared food bring some unfavorable consequences claim that these easier-prepared food don’t taste good and make people lose their passion in daily life, in my opinion, such change is positive and it did improve the quality of people’s life , which means people can enjoy civilized pleasures with more spare time.

In initially , one issue which makes my support this is people needn’t to spent so much time and use so much energy in order to finfish these everyday tasks. In the past , to prepared a single dinner, housewives had to work for hours to do so : wash the dirty vegetables brought form markets , slice the meat and pork then cook. Every step of preparation was a time-consuming task. today the situation might be different. .the only thing you should do is just enter into a supermarket where provide clean vegetables and meat , even some relevant ingredient, pay the bill and then take a few minutes to make them into a delicious dinner. In this case, everyone can enjoy their leisure ang have a pleasure life.

An additional factor is food preparation is no longer a tedious tasks in a sense, that is to say thee easier-prepared food provide us variety of food. In the past, we ate one or two kinds of food everyday ,even a delicious food can let us feel boring if we ate it everyday, so we never found eat our dinner is enjoyable . but now, with the help of these foods , a house wife, after a day’s hard work , can prepare several family’s favorite dishes in only a few minutes, which can make the whole family sit together, eat together and share what they experienced that day

An equally essential factory which deserves people’s attention is those food can make people eat healthy. Always, these semi-finished food are clean and nutritious. they provide what we need in our daily life suitable. on the contrary , if one in constantly drink pop or eating fires food or food with high cholesterol and grease, they can hardly be able to keep a healthy weight. So eating those easier-prepared food is a excellent way to keep healthy.

Judging from all these evidence offered above, we can arrive at the conclusion that such a change is a positive and it did improve the quality of people’s life.



先写在纸上的,打上去花了半个小时,速度要再提升啊...本文写长了点,412字,到底多少最合适呢??

昨天刚考完，提几个原则性的建议
1.以后一定要在电脑上打，直接对着屏幕想，感觉不一样的。其实ETS的作文题目都是185题目中比较常见的（如果在185中的话），建议lz可以多写一些常见的段子，各种不同题材的，其它较偏僻的题目要想好理由。写一篇作文抵得上100篇范文，前提是你已经对文章的结构，段落的结构了然在胸。对于范文嘛，像李笑来那本书，我觉得他的文章结构不值得借鉴，写作思路也比较诡异，但是值得借鉴的是他的语义表达很清楚，很accurate， 有些话可以背下来，写得多了就成自己的了。
2.字数嘛，戴云教主说，the 长er，the better. 其实我平时写作文限时不过430字，不会超过450，但是最后昨天写了500+，说真的，500多不是难事，在考场上我们的能力很比平时强很多，根本不会紧张，我也没考过G，作文你写的多了，自然就有感觉了。
3.我在考场上打字错了很多，希望lz在打字正确率上练习一下。
4.我大致看了一下，说真的，lz的语言功底还有待提高，用的词还有搭配上让人很别扭，比如use so much energy, 开头结尾不够有力。建议lz自己打造一个自己的模板，语法错误有些多。这也是为楼主好，呵呵