偶什么时候能写成楼主这样~ ~！口水
排比，引用，副词起句``连接得体```
They could influence your behavior, they could exert a positive effect on our study or work, and they can lend us a hand in time when we are in trouble
提个不算建议的意见 能不能把YOUR也改成OUR 感觉顺口点，或许第3句的CAN要改成COULD吧
So, the style that I choose a friend is largely depended on their characteristic instead of appearance.
largely和MAINLY哪个高级点```我也搞不清楚哦```如果后面个高级点就改成后面个吧
Admittedly, appearance also has its own merits. For instance, when we meet one person at first time, hardly can we get more information about him or she
这里是不是应该用HER好点？
it is from the behavior and act naturally, from the confidence spread out from our body, and the ability exhibit on our study and work.
第2个FROM不要不知道可不可以```
I consider what makes a good friend who is reliable, kind hearted and excellent characteristic
感觉这句话可以写的更好点``但是不知道要怎么改````
