以下是引用清清小蚂蚁在2007-6-7 8:52:02的发言：70-5 In your opinion, what are some important characteristics of a good teacher? Use reasons and specific examples to explain why these characteristics are important.
★ [2006.3.3]
I think that good teachers should have several characters. First of all, she /he must be patient. they can answer the students’ question again and again until they totally understand them. Secondly, they should see every student equally. They won’t consider someone good students because they are smart, and judge someone bad students because they are stupid. Finally, they must have the spirit of teaching, which means they will devote themselves to the career of teaching, have responsibility and see all students as their own children.
上面是竹子老师转贴的题目，偶按竹子的模板，偶改成：
I think that a good teacher posses the important characters such as being patient and treating people equally.
These characters will benefit the students’ developments in the career and life.（或者是a good teacher always be repected by the students)
First, a good teacher is a patient one.
For example, The teacher can answer the students’ question again and again with a smile. So the students can indeed grasp much more knowledge.
Secondly, the teacher is equal to everyone.
The teacher won’t consider someone good students only because they are smart, and judge someone bad students because they are stupid. In this case, the students will have better personality cultivation.
请问：
１老师偶这个答案什么地方要改呢？这个题目开头就要把所有的好的性格都讲出来吗，what are some important characteristics of a good teacher? 老师让说的描述性的话偶这里不知道怎么说，就是上面标出黄色的那句，是说性格为什么重要还是描述一下这两个性格是什么样的性格．偶上面写的是黄色的好点，还是绿色的好点呢？或者老师给讲一下这种多个答案的描述怎么办呢？
２如果问一个好老师的最重要品格是哪一个，为什么，偶就说是ＸＸＸ，First 原因１，for example,Secondly,原因２，because--- 但是这题是问一个好老师的重要品格是哪些，并且问why,偶是不是要２个还是３个品格呢？偶要答几个品格？每一个品格都要说两个原因的话，时间一定是不够的，那就每个品格只说一个原因吗？
３还有一个问题，就是用代词的时候，First of all, she /he must be patient. s/hecan answer the students’ questions again and again until they totally understand her/him. 这个念起来就是前面是she or he 后面是her or him这样念吗？？？
偶念代词的时候很容易乱，怎么有个好办法呢？题目问的是a good teacher，偶在答的时候可不可以改成good teachers 如何如何，这样就都是复数了？行吗？
谢谢竹子。。。
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70-5
In your opinion, what are some important characteristics of a good teacher? Use reasons and specific examples to explain why these characteristics are important.
★ [2006.3.3]
分析：
审题!这道题目问的是一个好老师应该具备的几个品格。所以，你在答题时要这样构思：我认为一个好老师应该至少具备如下两个品格。为什么要答2个品格呢？因为答3个的话，时间根本是不够的。另外，在每个品格后面要用1句理由和或细节或例子来支持你的这个“品格”。
开头就要把所有的好的性格都讲出来：
Personally, I believe that a good teacher should at least have the following two important characters, being patient and treating students equally.
这道题目不是描述性的！所以不用描述！故删掉：These characters will benefit the students’ developments in the career and life.（或者是a good teacher always be respected by the students)
First, a good teacher is a patient one. If a teacher can answer students’ question again and again with a smile, they can indeed grasp much more knowledge.
Secondly, the teacher can treat every student equally. He or she will not treat so called good students and bad students differently. This way, all students will get better personality cultivation. (81 words)
问题1：题目问的是a good teacher，偶在答的时候可不可以改成good teachers 如何如何，这样就都是复数了？行吗？
答：审题不清！不可以！
问题2：用代词的时候，First of all, she /he must be patient. s/he can answer the students’ questions again and again until they totally understand her/him. 这个念起来就是前面是she or he 后面是her or him这样念吗？？？偶念代词的时候很容易乱，怎么有个好办法呢？
答：这样比较麻烦！都用the teacher，可规避此矛盾。
Personally, I believe that a good teacher should at least have the following two important characters, being patient and treating students equally. First, a good teacher is a patient one. If a teacher can answer students’ question again and again with a smile, they can indeed grasp much more knowledge. Secondly, the teacher can treat every student equally. He or she will not treat so called good students and bad students differently. This way, all students will get better personality cultivation. (81 words) |
