TOPIC: Choose friends who are different from you or similar to you.

According the commonsense, people, compare with myself, can actually categorized tow type, different from me or similar to me. Friendship plays the indispensable part in our daily life. Two kinds of people will emerge when I making friends, so the preference of making friend who similar to me is my answer, the justifiable reason as following.

In my perspective, there is a largely possibility that person who is similar to me having some closing natures what I possess. The closing attributes are much more significant in the process of making friend. Because of closing characteristics, the contradiction which created during the common activities to a great degree can reduce. For example, the friendship between jack, one of my best friend and having nearly character with me, and I was established many years, the maximum contradiction amount us merely was a few times of gentle debates, if the concept of contradiction can define by this.

On the other hand, the person similar to me, is easy to develop a great friendship with me under the ensure circumstance that we have conjunct interest. During playing these uniform things it probable accelerate the friendship, like playing gymnastic competition together can increase trust and ability of group cooperation within each individual. Furthermore the friendship is also develops in the process of talking about the daily topic what we most interested.

Finally, the person similar to me  is almost in the possession of a same period of experience with me, this is a tremendous advantage in the communication , on account of I can talking about the felling which was buried in the deeply extend of my heart, in other words I can communicate at the degree of spiritual with the person of this type. That is why I prefer making friend with the person similar to me.


小弟英文特烂```不知道逻辑写的合理不合理,语法错误估计也不少,谢谢大家帮帮忙了

[ 本帖最后由 symphonyx 于 2008-7-6 03:40 编辑 ]

我写的太慢了``写了有一个小时啊````这TM考试怎么办啊````还有几天了

我跟你差不多的水平  也是12号考  放松心情吧 没准就考你练过的这篇

汗````````````````牛人们帮帮忙啊!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

it looks like that you are suffering a lot from grammer mistakes.
I recommend that you pay more attention to the verbs and structure of your sentences when you write, try to avoid writing sentence fracture(of which I'm sure you're fimiliar if you often use Word). e.g. "will emerge when I making friends"  I'm sure you actually meant "when making friends" or "when I make friends"
Pay attention to the difference between adj. and adv.e.  eg.you wrote "there is a largely possibility ", however, if you look at it again,you'll probably realize that the proper way to say so should be:"there is a large possibility", for the word possibility is a noun.
So, PROOFREAD if time permits!
After all, your writing does show a decent mastery of this language, for instance,your diction and the structure of the whole essay(if it is so called).so,GOOD LUCK.

谢谢楼上啊`````````我没什么英语的基本功,学英语没多久`````楼上能否再说说论证有问题吗