现在开始着手弄作文了 下午的时候终于决定自己写一会integrated writing 了...可是感觉写了好久.(必然超出20分钟)
由于这篇文章是属于观点支持类型的...我更不会了..所以我尽量写了一个.希望大家给我挑挑毛病(放肆的挑吧....)\
另外大家在句子衔接上,或者逻辑组织上有什么好的建议,说来听听.另外多教我一些补充支持的连接词吧......
此文章的资料就是在资源区的INTEGRATED WRITING里面 的第一个题 关于childhood amnesia
Integrated Writing
1:
The lecture talks about the cause of childhood amnesia,which generally happened in our first three to five years of our life.The professor gives many details and analysis added to the content stated in the passage that when we were a child before five years old,we could hardly remember any particular events.
In the lecture,the professor says that there is a general accepted theory that yong children code their experience randomly ,and can`t categorize the information,so their memory does not last long,while the adult can retain their memory because they can organize the information,which correspond with the author`s statement that people could not remember what they had done during their first 5 years tested by several studies and experiments.
Furthermore,the professor also bolsters the author`s view by some scientific analysis.According to the lecture,we know that there is a part of brain called Hippo Campus,which organize our input information,will not mature until five year old,which demonstrate the theory given by the author that we can not remember matters effectively during our first several years.
In the lecture,the professor says that there is a general accepted theory that yong children code their experience randomly ,and can`t categorize the information,so their memory does not last long,while the adult can retain their memory because they can organize the information,which correspond with the author`s statement that people could not remember what they had done during their first 5 years tested by several studies and experiments.
Furthermore,the professor also bolsters the author`s view by some scientific analysis.According to the lecture,we know that there is a part of brain called Hippo Campus,which organize our input information,will not mature until five year old,which demonstrate the theory given by the author that we can not remember matters effectively during our first several years.
