谢谢鼓励,我还差得远呢?
# _# T4 l7 B1 S写作刚刚开始,摸清了门路,看了范文,明天要归类题目,要去看阅读了
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下午:听写,场景分类下生物第九篇,笔记-做题-听写-跟读-全文笔记
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该死的,昨天没看阅读

惭愧,这样能考好吗?definitely impossilbe
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单词22-23结束了,24-25 还没开始,我的妈呀,肚子疼,下午还是听写了第九篇,不算太难。要再听一遍记笔记。
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晚上开始阅读和写作,今天一定要完成任务,
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明日复明日,明日何其多
# F' A' l6 S0 A' F. G我懂了,复习写作的步骤是:OG-看范文-讲义-写,今天就看og
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how essays are scored:
. c# o z9 o; G1.development:开头和结尾不能太长,不能为了凑字,写些没用的,development is the amount and kinds of support(details,examples and reasons)for your essay.the rater will judge whether you have addressed the topic and how well examples support your ideas
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2.organization:the points you make must be related to the topic and ideas you hold,avoiding repitition of ideas,跑题了,not relate to your idea,unclear connection ,(hard for reader to understand how the two parts or ideas are related
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