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[写作求拍] 麻烦大家不吝赐教

麻烦大家不吝赐教

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158. When famous people such as actors, athletes and rock stars give their opinions, many people listen. Do you think we should pay attention to these opinions? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Whether people should pay attention to advices that come from famous persons is a controversial issue. As I am concerned, their opinions really have some advantages over the ordinary people and deserve people’s attention. Also it is more rational to combine their advices with one’s specific condition.

It is undeniable that famous people are always more open-minded and have more broad span of view than ordinary people. They possess more experiences and knowledge and really do vey well in their specialized majors such as the actors are more familiar with the movie and athletes know a lot about sports. People can learn a lot from the advices and suggestions of the experts. For example, one famous actor's opinion might be vital useful experience for a freshman's career development. Many famous actors were once guided by their predecessors before they become famous.

In addition, the opinions from the famous persons can encourage people and then try to develop their potential. People usually hold the famous athletes as their models and admire them profoundly. Thus the opinions from their models hold powerful influence and can totally inspire their motivation and give some one the courage to overcome the problems he or she has met. For instance, currently, several NBA players are encouraged by the super star Michael Jordan when they were kids. After watching Jordan's fantastic performance on the playground and his talk, these children exercised more hard to fulfill their dreams and finally become NBA stars.

Although famous persons’ opinions are extremely valuable, people need to take into account of their personal conditions when making their decisions. Different person have different reactions about the famous person's advices based on their different experience, beliefs and positions. On need to make proper adjust to fit their unique situation.

Based on the analysis and reasons above, I argue that the opinions from famous persons are useful and of amount constructive information which are necessary to one's success in the future. Also it is advisable to make good use of these opinions to fit one's specific situation. Only all of these factors are taken into account, can one might success in the future.

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