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TF762的留言(好作文是背出来的~~~~~)

TF762的留言(好作文是背出来的~~~~~)

Shiyu,the most humorous and potential guy of new oriental school,was quoted in the TF762 as saying,"Reciting gives rise to an excellent composition."These days, some people believe that reciting is the only way to make a perfect composition.However, others think persisting in writing is more valuable.The way i see it,i agree with the former group of people, reciting makes perfect.
For starters,to learn a language is the process of memorization.So that's the reason why writing should be based on reciting.XXX,i learned from my history class, is a perfect example.
..........................................(语言素材略,不知道有过这经历的名人)As you can see,a variety of language materials he has accumulated by reciting laid the foundation for his novels.  
Furthermore,If we want to conquer the ETS in writing,having a satisfied grade.Reciting is your best choice.Take my friend,xiaoqiang,the man i most admire and look up to ,for example.He has an IQ of 75,which is far below the normal level and he is considered as a retard.In order to Participate in IBT. He engaged in preparing various language materials by reciting them.
Consequently,he got full marks in writing,by his persistence and hard-working.However,He attributes all his success to recite.
All in all,reciting is a much effective way to make a good composition.No matter who you are,XXXorxiao qiang,only to recite again and again,you will cross the narrow gate to the summit of writing
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今天结课,感慨颇多,难以言表,谨献此文

可惜好多SY的牛X词都没用上,因为这是第186个TOPIC

SY老师帮我批改下吧,我的E-MAIL  ocean12345x@sina.com

762的同学有什么想对老师说的就跟帖吧

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我原来不是分这么多段的额,发上来段落乱了?!

请大家多批评,指教哈

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不得不说一句话  太有才了你

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回复 #1 767731248 的帖子

小兄弟太牛X了  I have never seen such a talented boy

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你也挺牛x,咱班真产牛x型人材!

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SY teacher,thank you

you are the teacher I most admired and looked up to since I studyed english.It is you that make me have interest in english,it is you that make me have confidence,it is you that make me own faith to realize my dream,nomatter how many years it spent  It seemed that I have aggrandized your influence on me,but you did it!Thank you!My teacher,forever!

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呃。。。无语

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你用的词汇和短语感觉不多。。还有点高中生作文的感觉

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何止一个牛X了得!!
真的很谢谢您,史禺老师!上您的课真的很快乐呵!

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