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还有一个星期就考试了,只会写baby english怎么办?

还有一个星期就考试了,只会写baby english怎么办?

而且还要40分钟才能写完(最快的一次),只有7天了还有救么。。。。

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30. It has recently been announced that a new high school may be built in your community. Do you support or
oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details in your answer.
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I strongle support this plan since there is no enough school in local area for teenagers to study.

The education system in my community is in a seriously bad condition.The ratio of school to population is
too low here. We only have 5 high schools in my hometown in which a quarter of million people live. In  
other city in comparable size, generally 20 or even more high school are need for the children. Since the
existing schools are not available to so many students, many parents send their children to other city to
finish high school education. This often takes extra costs. For some poor family, finance is limited and
therefore some of  them have to let offsprings avoid further learning and find a job. If a new school is
settled, this situation will  more or less improved.

Furthermore, if a new school was built, it also helps to decrease accidents. Because some students have to
walk two or three miles away to attend class, troubles occur every year, such as traffic accidents or
personal attack by bad people. Two month ago, a child went home alone after school. On his way home, he was
kidnaped by a stranger and his family was asked for a huge ransom. Since then local government realizes
that it is a serious problem for students walk a far distantce to go to school. Building more schools near
our community is certainly good for safty.

In addition,a new school will also give poeple more space for activities. In my community, there is no
enought public space. Thus the only 5 schools are usually used as places of concerts and meetings as well
as casual talks for local people, whenever students are in vocation.

Although a new school may make local area a little narrow and some extra noise, the advantage is apparently
overweigh these drawbacks. It will be welcomed by local people and government.

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我也是有这个问题,写一篇要40分钟(500词)
我现在用这个方法,别人跟我说的。你也试试看能不能提高,就是先把开头结尾写好,然后把每段的主旨句子写出来,再接着用细节去支持。他们说就算你考试的时候写不完但是你的要表达的主旨放在那里了,考官就能看到。 也比到时候写不完结尾强

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首先我觉得第一段可以先把背景阐述一下
偌大的一个论坛,北工大的校友咋那么少涅= =
在我20岁的时候, make a big difference!
几个连接(请点击):
如何复习新托福
资源下载汇总贴
加试问题及机经
08年考试时间统计专帖

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另外我觉得有些东西在短期内无法提高,比如用词的高级,打字的速度
抓住你能在短期内提高的东西吧,比如写文章的思路,例证的深度等等
偌大的一个论坛,北工大的校友咋那么少涅= =
在我20岁的时候, make a big difference!
几个连接(请点击):
如何复习新托福
资源下载汇总贴
加试问题及机经
08年考试时间统计专帖

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今天尝试先写出框架在写例子,终于第一次30分钟内写完一篇!尽管只有310词,而且语言更BABY了。。。

看到一篇很好的文章,很有启发
http://bbs.taisha.org/thread-830263-1-1.html
发现绝对不能写思辩性的内容,BABY语言无法应付。写最日常最general的理由就好应付一些,例子也容易编!

我打字还是比较快,呵呵,在代码堆里摸爬滚打长大的

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一起加油吧,下周考!!

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我看了这个帖子了,很不错..
偌大的一个论坛,北工大的校友咋那么少涅= =
在我20岁的时候, make a big difference!
几个连接(请点击):
如何复习新托福
资源下载汇总贴
加试问题及机经
08年考试时间统计专帖

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this situation will  more or less improved。 差了个be
我也感觉第一段和最后一段可以加强一些,可以把题目的改写形式和subpoint的概述放进去,或者加点背景!
虽然例子简单,但是还挺多的,也很简单!
恩,我要好好学习!

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