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Topic ：Drivers have to pay a fee for driving in busy city streets when traffic is in a great amount.
Today, more and more automobiles go into the city, especially in the rush hours. Some government make the policy to reduce the amount of cars in the city. Collecting driving fees is a useful and popular methods. I couldn't agree more about this policy. This will reduce the number of private cars, give citizens a better environment to live, and improve the system of public transportation.
As we all know, the increasing number of cars in our city will aggravate the problem of automobile pollution. Automobiles emit various pollutants, mainly carbon monoxide(CO),carbon dioxide(CO2), nitrogen oxides(NO,NO2), and particles. According to my mum, who is a doctor, she says there is a increasing number of people who catch the diseases which are caused by air pollution. What's more , carbon dioxide is the principal cause of global warning, while the nitrogen oxides are responsible for acid rain. Thus, it would surely improve the air condition in the center of the city if there are less car.
Secondly, the traffic accidents is a common thing in nowadays which is mainly caused by the traffic jams. The goal to use a private car is to help you move convenient. But there are too many cars to even move on a single mile. And the danger of traffic accidents is higher than ever. People live in the city even couldn't feel safe when they are crossing a street. If collecting the fees during the rush hours, it would give the citizens who live around the city center a better and safer lives.
Last but not least, with the decrease of private car, more and more people would choose public transportation. Thus the government should invest more money to improve the service of transportation system.
To sum up, based on the above-mentioned, the policy to collect fees from drivers who want to enter city during the rush hours will benefit us dramatically. The number of private cars will be reduced, and our city will become saver and cleaner. It is also a opportunity to improve our public transportation system. Anyway, such change, however, is positive and it would improve the quality of people's life and the environment of our city.
PS 写完了自己都不忍心看一遍，本来不好意思放上来，但是丑媳妇始终要见公婆，12月1就要考了，怎么提高呀？
谢谢！
