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make one important change in a school that you attended.
With the development of mordern society,more and more complex problem that we will face,some people think about life while others think about career,every people would like to change these condisitons,however who have considered about the enviorment of our living city,even who have considered about the enviorment of our school that we have atteneded,if i could make one important change in a school that i attended i would like change the enviorment,i have following reasons to support that.
Firstly,the enviorment of my school too dirty to stay in there for a long time,maybe you can not believe that,however it is true,there are always have no cleaner to clean the public place,for instance the washroom,i often go to dorm until after class,i can not stand it almost,there are often have not enough water to wash the ditch,however i can not go to dorm after each class,therefore i have to wait until the last class,also it influence me when i have class,i can not concreate on listening.in conlusion the enviroment whether clean is infulence our productive.
In additon,there is not only washroom but the gallary outside the dorm is dirty,we often throw the rubbish in the box that on the gallary,however we can not see the cleaner to clean that,therefore we can not stand the air,in other word we can not breath the fresh air in the gallary when we get through.in conlusion the enviroment whether clean will influence our daily life.
Also not only these things so that i would like change the envoirment,there is another problem that is too less plant to good for our health, we often see the stone and steel in our school.although the school need build new house,it will cause numorouse dust in air,it is bad for our health,if the school can plant more trees or flowers,we can reading under the tree also can breath the fresh air,it can reduce the desease,such as cough.
Taking into account all these factors,i get the conlusion that i would change the enviorment in a school that i attended,not only in order myself but in order to all the people that in school.
