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第一帖:Alexander & 花舞叶旋习作汇总

第一帖:Alexander & 花舞叶旋习作汇总

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[ 本帖最后由 TOEFL759_198 于 2008-2-22 09:48 编辑 ]
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第一篇:题目
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Observing or studying animal behavior can teach us a lot about human nature.

明天写,摘自27号JJ.
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哎, 伟大的友谊不说了, 呵呵,
共勉!

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Confucius, the greatest philosopher and most influencial educator of ancient China, said:"Human being can learn knowledge from nature, especially from animmal." However, today there is a hot controverial issue about whether through specializing in behavoir of animal, people can learn useful idea or knowledge. Some people believe that people are high-creature unlike other animal, and therefore obeserving animal behavior teach us nothing, while others hold the opposite opinion about it. As far as I am concerned, to some extent studying animal behavior is useful for us. As the most senior creature, human should also study our own behavior so that we can requdiate the bad trend and avoid repeating mistakes. For starters,  researching some animal behaviors illustrates meaningful model for us. And even the low-animal can teach us how to work and live with others harmoniously. Take the ant for example. Although ants are small and lack of enough strength,  they can conquor the large animals which are larger several thousand times than them. What dose enpower ant so unbelievable ability? It is team-spirit and collaboration sense. When a ant finds foods, they will notice all other "peers" about the location of targets instead of enjoying the "delicious food" privately. People can study the important belief that collabration can injected huge energy into a team and even a country to conquer what people encounter, can not they? When it come to bussiness kingdom. any CEO working in successful muti-national company admits that high team-spirit is indispensable for the development.  And in China, some elder person alway indoctrinate the concept of respecting parents with crows: When elder crows have not strength to serach foods, the young crow hold responsible for taking care the elder ones. In fact, human can learn the philosophical priciple from animal.

However, it is more inportant that we human being should do self-examination from ourselves rather than only from animal. In retrospect, studying history about human can illuminate too many principle. If we fail to overcome them, the destiny of human will be  unpromising. Take  the second world war for example. War alway make untold people lose their life and destory human's civilization. Toady, If one country in order to benefits combats with others endless, More people would be murdered and lose their family members. Then terrible weapon, including nuclear weapon and biological weapon, even would destroy the whole world.

Base on the analysis I mentioned, I can safely draw conclusion that people not only study human nature from animal, but also we should pay more energy to reflect on our-self behaviors.  
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[ 本帖最后由 TOEFL759_198 于 2008-2-22 09:48 编辑 ]
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Do you agree or disagree with the opion that: The influence of classmates are more important than that from the parents on the children.

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这种方法不错啊

我更喜欢第二篇,第一篇才三段,结构不好.你写这么一篇作文多长时间啊??

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你们怎么不坚持了~~~

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写的不错啊!

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a new restautant will be built in your neighbourhood.Do u agree?why?

From my point of view, a new restaurant should be built in my neighbourhood. My arguments are as follows.


Among the reasons why I agree the plan is that a new restaurant can meet our needs of having better food. It is a known fact that in China the consumption demand has been increasing rapidly in the last few years. If there is a fancy restaurant nearby ,we may have access to a more comfortable modern life. For example, after enduring the high working stress prevalent in big cities , we might be able to enjoy a big meal in the restaurant instead of busily preparing food for the whole family.

Moreover, building a restaurant can create a large number of working opportunities. According to a recent survey,there are hudrends of thousands people looking for jobs in China. If a new restaurant was built, many people could find a job there. One of my close friend Jack had lost his job once, fortunately, a new fancy restaurant were built just beside his place. Since Jack was a master of everything about food, he soon became the chief cook in the new restaurant.  


Although I agree that it may bring us a little troube to some degree such as noises and crowded people, we can take measures to alleviate the bad impacts so that we can fully enjoy the convenience brought by the restaurant.

As can be seen from the above analysis, the advantages of building a new restaurant in our neighborhood are obvious and allow us no excuse to vote against it.

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