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Cai Yuanpei, one of the most known educators of China these days, said in an interview in CCTV education channel, “playing games is of scientific research” I firmly agree with his opinion. I think that playing games teaches us many things, such as responsibility, strategy and necessary skills associated with our real life.
Above all, playing games plays a crucial role in the mental development of a person throughout his life. It may improve one’s recognition on taking necessary responsibility for a decision or an act. Take my little brother for example. When he plays chess with me, even though I may let him win sometimes, I have never let him change his decision if he had made a bad move. What I want to let him know is, as anything you are doing in your life, you should likewise take your responsibilities in a chess game, whether be it bad or good.
Secondly, by playing games, one can learn about how to make strategies for life. Take chess again for an example. For me, chess can represent life in some circumstances. How can someone win a chess game without careful planning, speculation and calculation? Therefore, through those board games, you can increase your ability in making strategic decisions, which is somewhat useful for life.
With development of modern technology, the forms of games are also becoming diversified, and some of which present us greater pleasure as well as its educational value. Among those new games, video games are not supposed to be ignored here. For example, The Sims, aiming to fully project a person’s real life in virtual world, is a very popular Pc game today in which you control a little virtual figure and you are planning and designing his life. Simulating all kinds of real life situations, we can visually learn much meaningful things in our real life. Of all that we may understand from the game, it’s greatly noticeable how to properly appropriate your time for work, social activities and cultural activities, and how to spend your money wisely since you are relying on a regular salary.
All in all, even though playing game is at the end still for fun, we can still learn a lot from it for our life. Thus, if we can put our concentration on those right games and not be obsessed with those counter-productive genre that may only jeopard your intelligence and waste your time, to extract the most useful contents from what we are playing is always a valuable and expected activity in our life.
