【作文】句法多样化专题(呵呵,作文的葵花宝典)
句法多样化专题 (Syntactic Variety)
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History, philosophy, fundamental mathematics/calculus, and other abstract subjects have to be learned from books, or primarily from books.
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& L, T' }- i. K( q' u% `Some knowledge, such abstract subjects as history, philosophy, fundamental mathematics/calculus, has to be learned from books, or primarily from books.
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It is necessary for everyone to read imaginative literature, such as poetry, novels, or mythology.
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& P1 x* m* p# N8 H: [9 ^www.xiaomaguohe.netIt is necessary for everyone to read poetry and other types of imaginative literature such as novels and mythology.
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" R9 V$ s1 H% w. }" ?小马过河Most parents educate their children merely by instinct rather than by proper pedagogy, and usually do not care about their relationship with children and how such neglect influences the future development of their children.
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Most students are eager to obtain knowledge, but they lack the sense of what is good, or what is necessary and how such a deficiency in the concept of viewing the situation as a whole would mislead them.
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a small town a small and peaceful town
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' y- j/ L1 N1 B0 r3 S小马过河simple yet effective method小马过河-新托福专业备考社区0 f# y1 w, a7 C' E* e6 q! [
a direct and simple yet magically effective method4 k& r( F1 H) R) M* y
an irrational yet understandable decision
6 k; `: q+ B! w2 w* Xa fair and balance, yet undesirable decision
* y# y: D% p7 O" _ n9 Q小马过河obvious yet not the most significant reasonwww.xiaomaguohe.net: L3 D$ w* z( W
expensive yet worthy course
' ~/ y" w/ f! Z3 i) k. ~0 k9 J小马过河-新托福专业备考社区slow yet indispensable processTOEFL,IBT,托福,新托福,机经,小马过河,留学,美国,海外! ~/ D# \, O3 H
A weird, entertaining, yet TRUE story....小马过河-新托福专业备考社区3 M7 ]" n( a# B, R8 h1 X( N
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All adult birds molt their feathers at least once a year, and upon close observation, one can recognize the frayed, ragged appearance of feathers that are nearing the end of their useful life. [小马过河-新托福专业备考社区]# }! i% F8 E6 F$ D. b8 X2 o( i
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Most students can hardly stand for his typically dry and dull lectures that would normally continue at least several quarters without giving any essential information.
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The impact that technology has had on our daily life and society in general, is undeniable. It will become even greater as computers get faster, smaller, smarter, and so inexpensive that virtually everyone will be able to own one.
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9 g e9 n' f uTOEFL,IBT,托福,新托福,机经,小马过河,留学,美国,海外A class led by a lethargic teacher could be extremely dull, dry, and so boring that drives everybody in the class into sleep.
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Learning in essence is a process that is time-consuming, painstaking, and so hard that virtually only persistent few can finally have a sense of real achievement.
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A conscientious teacher always prepares his lecture carefully, intelligently, and with the full consideration of all possible aspects concerning the subject.小马过河-新托福专业备考社区0 T0 _) V. o9 s" }3 S' K7 a
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An absent-minded teacher lacks drive to make class intensely focused, often preparing nothing in advance, wandering among random topics, thus wasting and killing times of industrial students.0 F* o% G* ~ }( Q) L) |3 s7 S
2 Z. _" Z9 ], Q: r) W8 w2 G& O小马过河-新托福专业备考社区 主语相同的两个句子并列，“and”对应的中文应该是“也”。www.xiaomaguohe.net o, P# B6 I; H) J
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Books keep records of thoughts and ideas, and are the major source from which people obtain knowledge.小马过河-新托福专业备考社区+ U: K$ x" {! W- T, R
书本记录着思想和理念，也是人们获取知识的主要来源。
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书本记录着思想和理念，所以也是人们获取知识的主要来源。
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5 Y, a# a9 w0 N( P) h! U历史必然模糊含混，也正是如此，它才那样有趣以至于很多人都被深深的吸引，因为人们总是忍不住要追寻真理。
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$ a" z' T' }7 ]; _. d' a! n" E小马过河-新托福专业备考社区Chinese children unfortunately have few rights to make their own decisions, and subsequently often have to do things that they do not enjoy doing at all.
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Modern vehicles have extended the range of people’s activity, and thus made much more goods available to local markets.
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It is the nature of human that determines that people tend to trust themselves rather than others, and consequently they often misguide by their own feelings rather than reasons.
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A nice environment will also make people healthier.
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A bad environment will not make people healthier either. [小马过河-新托福专业备考社区]6 J( B3 N- O; I- I7 p* {
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Nor a bad environment will make people healthier.
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计算机不仅给人们带来了方便，还是人们学得更多。TOEFL,IBT,托福,新托福,机经,小马过河,留学,美国,海外8 f" }1 u0 K8 b
Computers have not only brought convenience, but they have also made people learn more.TOEFL,IBT,托福,新托福,机经,小马过河,留学,美国,海外: r! E8 p" S9 P3 P6 o
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* M! \0 [; L" N3) 系动词和表语之间
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Not that emails or telephones have made people less personal, but that people themselves have become less personal. One of several possible reasons is that people usually lack of adequate communicating skills.
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A perfect environment will not only make people happier and healthier, but it will even make them more productive.
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Parents or other adults often give merely a casual answer to a serious question from a curious child, an answer that makes no sense at all, and might have unforeseeable negative consequence in the future.
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simple yet effective method
) B8 {( Z a8 H! h% I) y8 W小马过河-新托福专业备考社区a simple, direct, practical yet magically effective method
2 }4 f3 d$ e$ b' |/ V5 T- n/ }) Uirrational yet understandable decision
2 _$ q& O$ p! V! B# b+ o小马过河-新托福专业备考社区a fair and balance, yet undesirable decision
$ R3 @7 \6 E. d1 Yobvious yet not the most significant reason
) C8 p' ~/ A3 e# j2 d [小马过河-新托福专业备考社区]expensive yet worthy course
9 R4 ?+ R6 ?% j+ h& _www.xiaomaguohe.netslow yet indispensable process
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2. 包装（反复取非）
( c) A: S8 S* B小马过河History is useful.www.xiaomaguohe.net4 d0 w1 y0 D g# |* W! J4 q; h
History is not useful.
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Hypocrites do not tell the truth.
# }7 k8 ^" l% |3 w [小马过河-新托福专业备考社区]Hypocrites do tell the truth when and only when they have convinced that by doing so they can benefit.www.xiaomaguohe.net+ h, d( i. b6 f1 D* D% ~% ~
Hypocrites have many forms, but they have one thing in common: Hypocrites do tell the truth when and only when they have convinced that by doing so they can benefit.TOEFL,IBT,托福,新托福,机经,小马过河,留学,美国,海外; A4 O+ i4 N8 T4 d3 w
; m" q# E% N9 l7 [- ]! sAlthough most people were hostile to the hypocritical behaviors, and believe profoundly in the sacredness of truth and the inviolable freedom of those who dare to tell the truth, they often betray their principle, dignity, and in effect become accompanies of other hypocrites. Hypocrites have many forms, but always have one thing in common: they essentially have no principle at all. They tell the truth when and only when they feel the truth is on their side, otherwise they would refuse rather than accept the truth, or remain silence even choose to lie for the sake of their own safety if they find they are threatened, even when that threat is at most potential.
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It’s fortunate that our society always has a small portion of citizens who always try to insist their principles and struggle to defend even when tremendous cost is anticipated. When nearly everyone in this society had learnt to remain silence, Doctor Jiang Yan Yong stood out and shouted the truth about SARS. When nobody in this country is not afraid of AIDS, Doctor Gao Yao Jie is rushing around to help the helpless. When most people in this country believe money is everything, and should be made by whatever means is possible, Zhou Li Tai, as a lawyer, is persistently fighting for the weakest group who might be incapable of paying his consultant fee.
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Computers have not only brought convenience, but they have also made people learn more.TOEFL,IBT,托福,新托福,机经,小马过河,留学,美国,海外. i, L. {5 l" Z
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A good environment will make people happier.TOEFL,IBT,托福,新托福,机经,小马过河,留学,美国,海外. e1 E; D3 i f1 U% e6 ?
4 L$ X) F: D# k) c" e" mA nice environment will also make people healthier.小马过河# b; U, R3 } _/ @+ a4 J
% C0 T& v% ~. s0 E& ]( FA perfect environment will not only make people happier and healthier, but it will even make people more productive.TOEFL,IBT,托福,新托福,机经,小马过河,留学,美国,海外: @/ j' X/ ~$ I. U8 u
4 j: ]0 s' Z- O7 @* hwww.xiaomaguohe.netModern transportation vehicles such as automobiles have not only made more goods available in the local markets, but they have also lowered the price of the products in the markets.
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