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In recent years, there is an increasingly common question that whether A or B . It is possible that some people hold the viewpoint that A. Nevertheless, a lot of people share the opposite standpoint. As far as I am concerned, people can acquire more beneficial points than weak ones if B because---.

To begin with, it is undeniable that people are capable to benefit from B strikingly on an obvious aspect that ---.We may cite an appropriate example which is very persuasive. ---.To the already familiar facts a great deal of further evidence may be added. At the same time, we can easily understand that---. So,---.

On the other hand, people’s attention should be paid on another remarkable virtue gained from B that---.---(describe). For instance, ---. There are still numerous similar examples existing around the modern world. As a result,---.

Not only B can give us pronounced merits, but also A may bring people some positive aspects. One of the advantages of A is to ---. Meanwhile, in another way, A can make us---. Even though we do get a couple of advantageous points from A, I maintain that B definitely provides people with more notable, more significant, and more proper profits. Consequently, are there any reasons why we do not tend to choose B?

From what has been discussed above, we could safely draw the conclusion that considerable the benefits that A results in are, they can not compete with the dominant aspects that B brings about. With the great help of B, people will enjoy a brighter future and a more harmonious world.

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我自己弄的模板,277个字的。
恳请大家指点指点,多谢啦!!!

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个人建议把模板再精简精简`其实模板太长的话你考试就要花一部分时间回忆以及打字了`而且你写这么长的模板`核心内容肯定最少也要200字`一般来说是不止200字的`因为一个example和detail一展开最少就要100多字了`写一个肯定不够`一篇500多字的文章有一半都在瞎扯淡`这样太繁冗了`建议删节一部分`注重于各个detail和eg的展开比较好`!模板并不是王道`detail和eg才是`!
再璀璨的星空,少了你,便是寂寥...
再喧嚣的街道,少了你,也是单调......

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豁然开朗!多谢多谢!

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哦!我还以为是越长越好呢

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说句打击你的话
废话太多了
第一段全部是废话
有些人支持A,有些人支持B,这不废话么,除了A和B他们不可能有别的选择
一看就觉得是template
考官很反感这种很明显的模板的


希望你不介意,我对模板不对人
当人生不如意时,可掏出小弟弟,凝视它、静思它所蕴含之精神:能长能短,能粗能细,能伸能曲,能软能硬,学学它,眼前的困难算个鸟!

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嗯。。。谢谢楼上

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其实不用全盘否定自己的模板,你应该再改进,让它很自然的成为文章一部分,这样就不会让考官觉得别扭了.现当然在还有欠缺.

还有就是我说过的,要5分钟内打出你的的模板,这需要练,如果这个作到了模板写长了也可以.而且你还有25分钟,能写很充分的论据.

[ 本帖最后由 半月霜天 于 2007-12-27 19:23 编辑 ]

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多谢多谢!我会再改的

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模板300,内容400
合起来就700了,太长!
赶上托福阅读了
考官改文章是有时间限制的
文章太长容易让他反感
偌大的一个论坛,北工大的校友咋那么少涅= =
在我20岁的时候, make a big difference!
几个连接(请点击):
如何复习新托福
资源下载汇总贴
加试问题及机经
08年考试时间统计专帖

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