我这有篇老师布置的作文,题如下,字数要求400单词,同T的独立写作部分差不多.
题目很有趣,我想作为T中一道论人的品质题也可以这样出.
如 What do you think the most important quality of a student/ a businessman/ a person is in the modern society?
我已经写了一大半了,例子和结尾写不好了

,各位仁兄给些参考吧,(中英文皆可)
T写作------让我们共同进步!
Statement: Joseph Epstein, a famous writer, once said, "We decide what is important and what is trivial in life. We decide so that what makes us significant is either what we do or what we refuse to do. But no matter how indifferent the universe may be to our choices and decisions, these choices and decisions are ours to make. We decide. We choose, so are our lives formed. In the end, forming our own destiny is what ambition is about."
Do you agree or disagree? What's your opinion? Give examples or details to support your idea.
我的版本是:
Of Ambition
Joseph Epstein, a famous writer, once said, "We decide what is important and what is trivial in life. We decide so that what makes us significant is either what we do or what we refuse to do. But no matter how indifferent the universe may be to our choices and decisions, these choices and decisions are ours to make. We decide. We choose, so are our lives formed. In the end, forming our own destiny is what ambition is about." Yet opinions may vary on this statement. In my opinion, I agree to Epstein's view, because we need ambition to guide a direction in our life.
Ambition is the destiny in our own life. It is with ambition that we have confidence in doing everything no matter what we are, and what background we have. So ambition has no relation with outside surroundings, but with our innate desire. Even one who has physical deficiency will have confidence in himself if he has a life goal. The Napoleon, the greatest political and military leader in French history, never worried about his appearance shortcoming—being very short as a military commander at war. Also, the attack of poliomyelitis in 1921 made Franklin Roosevelt, the American 32nd president, permanently crippled and unable to stand or walk. However, he never lost his courage, optimism or desire for a political career. His personal struggles transformed the once supercilious young man into one of the most outgoing political figures of the century and one of the most influential and controversial US presidents. So ambition is the choice made by ourselves.
Why do we regard ambition as something very important and necessary? If ambition is to be well regarded, the rewards of ambition---control over one’s destiny and being more competitive in the society---must be deemed worthy of the sacrifices made on ambition’ s behalf. The life experiences have weaved with our dreams that account the reason why we live. With ambition, we will be more hard working, because we know that all of our efforts will finally help inject force realizing our dream. We will optimistically confront and solve the problem with confidence, despite the reality is sometimes hard to tackle.
Besides,... 大伙给点建议,帮我想想例子和结尾; 对上文有不同意见或评价也请指正喔:
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