A teacher's ability to relate well with students is more important than the excellent knowledge of the subjet being
taught?

If this question being put forward once before I would definitly disagree this statement. That's to say, obviously,
knowledge being taught is more vital than the teacher's ability to relate well with students.
But now, there is vivid example happening surrounding me. She was once my tutor at my uni, Miss Lin who has so
many distinguished characteristics.
First of all, she is a person with sense of responsibilty and the skill of motivating class activities. In addition, her
passion for her work and her deligence inspire me a lot. What's more, she not only gives me the advice on my
academic works but also on the problems I meet during four years at uni.

Who influens you more? your parents or your friends--(the case of myself)  = Are parent your best teacher for your
growth?

Friends only make an impression on your life, they do not have the same influences that your family has.
I learn about trust, ambition, and love.
(well how about TV series --Friends--they connect and combine forming stronger relation tie than with each' s
family. Another version, I do believe.)
Friends want you to stay the same: they don't want you to be different while family is ambitious for you for they
always push you forward.
A family's love is not judgemental. They love you for everything you are. A family loves. Friends only like you.

Planning for your leisure time? --( Gaoqian made full use of her summer holiday to do a lot of things)--

It's good to plan what you're going to do with our free time.
on the other hand, it's also fun sometimes do things without plans
We can plan our free time activities for one day of the weekend, and let the other day plan itself. This time our free
time gives us the enjoyment of having it both ways.

  A little bit more...!!!

sophie~you have done a lot of work!

拿破仑once said, a soldier ,who is unwilling to become a General, is not a qulified soldier.

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原帖由 heqiongsophie 于 2007-12-15 13:54 发表
我把后部分写了, 看看和全文是否连贯??  我总觉得有点不连贯...
     
      In addition, people are under heavy pressure of fierce competing in the modern society, so we should have a clear job goal an ...

例子可以用HENRY FORD的:.....Ford believed that workers who made the cars should afford one themselves.Since he couldn't persuade his partners ,he bought out their shares in the company and moved along with his plan. This decision proved to be critical to Ford's success and the prosperity of the Amercan automobile industry......(具有ambition&goal 详细的可以参见史禺老师EXAMPLE POOLS里面HENRY FORD的例子)

至于结尾的话,我觉得可以再次抒发一下你对于AMBITION的看法.简单一点就行

我的评论就这么多,希望能有所帮助.

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拿破仑once said, a soldier ,who is unwilling to become a General, is not a qulified soldier

Why do you quote that?

Thanks to chin   for your providing examples.
And I think it is a good one to illustrate the argument.

  An example of ambition requirement. (on the first floor)
However, I sadly find that the tip was written last year.