老师，我写的一篇关于人物的口语题。请看看有什么问题,修改下吧。# E2 w* X+ I0 M) R- F
I only have a father in my family. He has influenced my life greatly, because he has so many good qualities. My father can always achieve a comfortable balance between work and family. He is a well liked professor in a conservatory of music and he is quite enthusiastic about his lessons. Althought my father tend to take in new theory or information quite quickly, he never lost human contact with his students. As a father,he always try his best to make a harmonious family. not only that, he often makes exchanges of feeling with me, and makes holidays together. His personal values set a good example for me to follow in my own life. This is why I think my father has inflenced me the most in my family.

I only have a father in my family. & O7 |- A8 P$ j0 Y0 U& m* i' N
有歧义`你这句话表达的意思是我只有一个爸爸`言外之意是别人有很多爸爸`建议改成我家里只有我和我爸
" ^" u' ?. R+ rachieve a comfortable balance
/ I4 P5 C3 M1 U( Z; e表达有问题`去掉comfortable就好`9 r5 l. e" r; d2 v
He is a well liked professor # H" A1 ?0 |/ G: i; n
如果要表达受欢迎的话就用popular3 H- w2 W% E* _1 P3 e: p
Althought my father tend to take in new theory or information quite quickly, he never lost human contact with his students.( C  j, v. U" F
没弄明白你的意思% Q% r! F* p2 e& K' t* l
he always try his best
% @( V8 N, `7 m: l用第三人称单数5 a! t/ q) z$ H5 |& [5 O3 `
makes exchanges of feeling 7 F# C% v2 E0 K& y$ m+ |5 X. r. ?
我不知道这样表达对不对`但是感觉有点怪`建议改成emotional exchange
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inflenced me the most in my family.
9 f+ C7 K2 o- Q3 ?% g9 Y1 y去掉the

太感谢了！！