刚才做了一篇综合写作~希望有空的高手们指点一下。+ ]( P- V! H/ w" Q8 o
$ P/ s, a: Q; j9 {( ?0 i是 新托福考试写作特训 LONGMAN iBT TOEFL Writing~中综合写作第一篇。 |; S0 V% O: x2 s% Z; _" O
* g0 ^# S. D" u" C$ vThe lecture has a very positive attitude toward the reading. The lecture holds an opinion that Internet had a bad consequence for society, which contradicts the author’s notions of reading. There are several aspects to demonstrate the professor’s idea.: _6 C* Z+ C" W- Y! y7 W
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As the lecture says, it is easy for criminals to get the information of credit card, pin number and so on. That is to say, our personal information can be explored by the internet. E-mails and other personal websites can be scanned if the password is found on internet. There is almost no control for people to enter the internet. In addition, some master pieces can be easily downloaded through internet instead of being paid. Thus, the owner of the works can’t get what they should have, like money. $ D3 z& F' p M! c
5 T9 H% Z; r O/ X7 ~8 zHowever, the passage exposes that Internet makes communication more convenient than before. And information is widely spread through Internet so that everyone enjoys a better life. Some people have been depending on the Internet in their life, for instance, doctor and school children. What’s more, business and politics are going on well on Internet, like banking on-line and elections. At last, Internet provides a good way to selling and buying. This benefits the disabled and the old.3 j2 H, S4 D: O; e& r9 ~' h# C
