titile: build new restaurant nor not?

With the rapid development of the human society, people has more desire to live comfortable than any times before. However, there is no consensus on whether to build a new restaurant in my neighborhood. Some people maintains that a new restaurant will give us more advantages such as more profit, more entertainments than the disadvantages like the destruction of the environment, While others may disagree.

From my personal angle alone, the later point coincide with mine and a matter of factors support this opinion.

First of all, people without environment are like flower without sunshine, while live without fresh air and limpid water likes fish without water. Unfortunately, human likes a foreigner who comes in the night. They take any resource they want, without caring the feeling of the earth. No matter how success we are made from the last century, we can not doubt that the process became a disaster to the earth. However, it is widely acknowledged that what we give to the mother, the earth, today, will also continue to her son, human being, tomorrow. One day we lead the earth as the pollution bed, we will die on the pollution.


In addition, in my neighborhood, the destruction is more obviously. There is a time when I was a child, I could play with the insects, listening the lively song from the bird. Only in this time we could have breath the fresh air leisurely without any pollution. We regard the earth as our mother, and treat animals like our brothers. Human and other species are like one type of blood that we unit together harmony. However, in the last century, the forest is destroyed to build furniture and water is use as the bed of the pollution. I am a child, I don not understand, why we become so unkindly to do this.

What is more, although the new restaurant will accomplish more economic profits for the society, we could not ignore the harmful effect it will lead to. Besides with the pollution, it will also lead to the competition with our companies already build. It is possible that it will lead to a raise of the unemployment of my neighborhoods.

In conclusion, I am fully convinced that it is impressive for us to take action on protect the environment rather than destroy the earth. I never fails to fascinate that the paradise is just a place, where we can breath the fresh air, drink the limpid water and look the star from the clear sky without any pollution and pressures.

快考试了，最近一直再练作文，求大家指点

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live comfortable 应该是comfortablely
第二段
people without environment，这种情况似乎不可能出现吧，应该是people without good environment之类的。第一句注意断句，太长了。like 太多了，体现词汇多样性可用resemble,seem,as等~
应该是No matter what success we have made吧
we can not doubt that ....很奇怪，最后两句没看懂，可能是我水平有限的说,continue to 我觉得是pass to 吧
第三段，play with 很搞笑,insect seems to be glad to play with u.
lively song from the bird,改为the lovely tunes sung by birds.你一开始不是I吗，怎么下一句就是we了？
leisurely 多余，
很奇怪，这段和主题有什么关系

谢谢！我现在也觉得好像第二段不太着边，有点凑字了
还是准备一下词汇替换，我打字时一着急，总想不起来了

我也去帮忙改一下别人的先

Some people maintains that a new restaurant will give us more advantages such as more profit, more entertainments than the disadvantages like the destruction of the environment, 这句话太长了，中间的那个such as应该改成,say,比较合适吧，注意say前的那个逗号。

Unfortunately, human likes a foreigner who comes in the night. 第二段的这句话和后面有什么逻辑关系吗？