冲刺阶段...1小时连写两篇,好累啊...111和123,谢谢高人指点
第一篇
It is true that spending time with a large numbers of friends can be cool, by organsising activities such as a party or team sport game. However, sometimes spending too much time with a large numbers of friends can drive me crazy and I can never talk about serious things. In fact, in order to talk about more serious topics such a personnal problems, spending time with one or two close friend is a better choice.
When I want to relax myself, I will gather all my friend together and choose a place to have fun. It can be a arcade, a football court or a lounge. Lots of friends represent non_stop entertainment; one makes a joke then another one will start telling a funny story of his. Even at table it will be a mess, continuous laughing and chit_chatting! We can then play football and have a reel match! It's really the most relaxing, happiest and crazy time you can ever have. However sometimes, after calming down, I would like to talk about serious things, such as problems with my girlfirend. But no one would listen to me and prefer keep on having fun.
Having one or two close friends seems to me a better choice at this point. For example when I want to talk about my problems, they would listen really carrefully to me and help me. Because we've spend a lot of time between us, get know ourselves very well and build a strong frendship and reliance. He/she will never let me down, just as I will never let him down. However when I'm spending time with too much friends, I would never get know one very well because he/she is just a little part of the whole.
Also, fewer friends doesn't equal to less fun. We still can make jokes, have fun and drive ourselves crazy. Even though we couldn't organize a reel soccer game, we can still choose to play other games like chess or monopoly. It's still a lot of fun!
In a nutshell, making the choice between spending time with a lot of friends or fewer ones depends on what you expect from them. I would conclude on the point that you shoudn't spend all your time with one or two friends nor with a large number of friends. Try to change! Because both have their advantages and cons.
第2篇:
It is true that reading books about real people, real events, and established facts contributes to one's cultural knowledge. However only reading those books isn't an intelligent choice. In fact, reading fictions, science-fictions, or anything created by its author's thin imagination is very instructive. It can help one to develop its imagination for example.
Reading books such as an historical novel or an autobiographical novel helps us to deal with our life. We can learn from one's biography how he overcome all the problems in his life. For example, when I read the biography of Cai Yuanpei, one of the leading buisinessman of China, I learned a lot about the darkness in the market. Hence, I knew it wasn't the way of life that I wanted, so I choose to study law instead for my studies. Can't imagine all the pain that I avoided!
Even though reading books about real people, real events, and established facts are instructive, I, from far, deny the good influence on me that had the "imagination_created" books. For example, after reading this book called "Chase: The Return" writed by Jay Zhang gave me a lot of hope about my life. The story is about a little boy living in poorest places of China Hebei and how he change his life by never giving up and working hard. At the end, he became a national hero and despite the fact that he was a millionaire, he didn't forget about his past. He helped till the end the end of his life, with his fortune, everyone he could. And I want to be a man just like him.
In a nutshell, reading "reality_base" books teache me a lot but it isn't enough because you can't find everything in those books. Sometimes or rather, frequently, we should read "imagination-created" books to enrich or imagination and curiosity.
谢谢高人指点!!!自我感觉是对文章的结构和各个段落的SUB POINT不太明确...只是想确定一下~~~
PS: "-"符号不好使...换成_
