1、 So spectacular the movies are that not only ease up his mind,but also make a more harmonious relationships ?among? his family.

2  In conclusion, numerous though the disadvantages that setting up a new theater enjoys,thay can not compete with the benefits that the theater brings about, when/if a strict control to the threatening matter by the government and the public consciousness/self-kowledge （我赞同的事物需要改进的地方，即我赞同的观点的缺点如何改进的方案）are taken into consideration/deliberation/account.

第一句lz请说个中文好么，方便理解你的意思
第二句么，首先，这么复杂的句式（都是戴云惹的祸）不适合用在结尾处，适合在开头做个非常煊的hook，还有句式最好多理解一下，愣套就会有误区，比如这disadvantages 能 enjoy 么？所以是：Numerous， though the disadvantages of  a new theatre construction brings about, they can not compete with the benefits that having a new theatre enjoys, when the whole community and government pay enough attention.

谢谢!
那么你改的so the spectacular movies  not only  ease up his mind but also make more harmonious relationships 中,relationship后面可以加 among his family吗?
谢谢回复!

第一句 So spectacular the movies are that not only ease up his mind,but also make a more harmonious relationships ?among? his family.
的意思是 这些电影很好看很精彩,所以不仅放松了他的神经 而且增进了他和家人的和谐关系.
不知道英文这样表达对不对?

谢谢