请问这两段哪一段更好？
不知在作文里那一段好一点
Contrary to the opinion we have just gone over is my heartfelt belief that the classmates' role is ususally exaggrated, for considerable as the benefits when they enjoy with their classmates are, we can not ingore the drawbacks that the classmates are less experienced and they sometimes have negtive effects on each other. On the contrary, the parents, in my view, are the best teachers.
On the contrary, I maintain that the classmates' role is exaggrated on some level. Although a child enjoys considerable benefits surrounded by his classmates, we can not ingore their drawbacks, such as the lack of experience and the negtive effects , which are congenital.
多谢指点！
