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社区应不应该建高中 思路混乱中 求救!

社区应不应该建高中 思路混乱中 求救!

各位好
这道题偶个人的思路是:
应该建 原因1:方便社区内孩子上学 离家比较近
                   2:更安全 去远的学校上学路上车多 减少发生交通事故的可能性
                   3:可以带动社区经济的繁荣
                   4:有一点弊端因为学生的读书或活动声音会打扰社区居民
                   5:总的来说利大于弊 该建
但是看到李笑来的范文却是这样的:
  

The  basic prerequisite of success for any community is the education of its  citizens. Because the advantages


  

of a high school education in my  town are presently available to only a limited number of students every year,  I


  

wholeheartedly support the  construction of a new school facility to serve our community.


  


  

The  competition to get into high school in my town is fierce. There are three  middle schools in town, but only


  

one high school. Because the  number of applicants to the single high school far exceeds the available  spaces in the


  

high school, only the richest  and most qualified students are able to go to school. The skills taught in  high school


  

including advanced math,  analysis, and high-level reading and writing are important to every citizen,  no matter


  

what profession they later  choose. Even if they are manual laborers, the ability to critically analyze  problems taught


  

in high school will make them  better and more highly skilled workers.


  


  

Beyond teaching practical skills to more local children, another high school will give children more


  

opportunity to attend college.  Holding a college degree is almost the only way a person can be assured of  getting a


  

stable, high paying job. Even a  degree from a two or three year junior college can mean the ability to make a  salary


  

thousands of yuan  annually higher than a high school diploma.


  


  

Because  our current high school is so small, many bright children with promising  college careers ahead of


  

them have no way of even  obtaining the high school diploma! We must make sure the road to higher  education


  

remains open for as many young  people as possible.


  


  

Finally, if we cannot afford  to open this high school, our town will have a serious problem with the  number


  

of unemployed youths who  graduate from middle school with nothing to do. If they cannot find good  jobs, they


  

might be tempted to commit  crimes, use drugs, or, if they are girls, engage in prostitution. Giving  these children


  

another option would both save  them and help society.




                    里面大部分都再讲建高中的好处或是教育的好处 于是我很茫然 不知道是不是自己理解偏了 请各位大侠予以指点不胜感激  


[ 本帖最后由 xuxiaoqian1025 于 2008-2-12 12:26 编辑 ]

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这种题目没有什么标准,能写清楚就好了。

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没理解偏,但第二条理由不是很有力的论证~建议去掉
把其他三个支撑写好就可以了
孩子,不要哭泣.
带着最初的梦想,我们上路吧...
世界,就在脚下......

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那李笑来那样写教育的好处是不是也可以呢?

那李笑来那样写教育的好处是不是也可以呢?

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