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冲刺作文思路,谢谢各位大侠!!

冲刺作文思路,谢谢各位大侠!!

2006 年9 月15 日 机经里的独立写作
请各位帮忙告诉下该写什么样的理由呢?谢谢!!!
Do you agree or disagree that it is difficult to discover(注:原文没有to discover) the truth of news or information since there is so much of them?

[ 本帖最后由 jin776 于 2008-2-26 19:09 编辑 ]

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同意:
1,因为媒体为了赚钱的需要,经常不择手段,有时候可能会扭曲事实
2.因为媒体为了满足大众的好奇心,所以经常报道大家感兴趣的话题,却不一定是事实
3.由于我们很少并且有很小的可能性去花时间调查事物的真实性,所以容易被假象所误导.
不同意:
1.因为真实性是新闻和媒体的基本标准
2.大众需要真实的信息,这一点已经成为共识
3.因为如果是一个经常报道并扭曲事物真实性的媒体将很快被人们唾弃.
4.因为真实性是媒体的生命线,大多数媒体都会珍视事实的真实性

[ 本帖最后由 ChenChenSeven 于 2008-2-26 13:50 编辑 ]

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题目中好像并没有突出媒体这一点,只有news和information,并未提到它们的来源,也许可以人与人之间的交流,或者学术上的不同信息,所以把媒体作为切入点是不是有点偏离呢?当然如果以媒体作为切入点,你提的理由都很好。

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引用:
原帖由 ChenChenSeven 于 2008-2-26 13:46 发表
同意:
1,因为媒体为了赚钱的需要,经常不择手段,有时候可能会扭曲事实
2.因为媒体为了满足大众的好奇心,所以经常报道大家感兴趣的话题,却不一定是事实
3.由于我们很少并且有很小的可能性去花时间调查事物的真实性, ...
十分感谢

[ 本帖最后由 jin776 于 2008-2-26 18:46 编辑 ]

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Obviously, the news we get usuall are from the coverage of our mess media.
So the reasons Severn provides are reasonable.
Where there is a will, there is a way.
Classification作文版引导
5月15日作文题9

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作文才女来了...

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谢谢,总结后写了一篇

There are many resources of news and information in the world, it's difficult to know whom to believe and what is truth.

In modern society around 2008, we live in an information explosion period. We could get enormous news and information everywhere everyday. Faced with such situation, the vast of people claim that they can't believe the truth of news and information. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the viewpoint of the following reasons.

It is not an easy thing for us to judge the truth of overwhelming news and information around us. Because people can never go through all of the data provided to them. For example, who could tell the truth about the death of Princess Diana in 2007? Are the news, magazines or any other mass media? We could read massive news and reporters about it, but we can not judge the truth. The details are never totally announced to the public, for although the journalists themselves are also not able to know. The articles written by them just tell some aspects of the incident. Then for most of common people, it is hard to decide which is true which is false. In addition, more and more news especially like hot news is just written for impressing people.

Journalists are usually competing to get a piece of shocking news in order to write attractive news. It much likely happens to the famous movie stars and singers who are the most concerning of the fans who are curious about all things about the stars. Rumors and affairs appear as the head titles of newspaper, front pages of magazines and television programs. However, who knows the truth at the first time they saw it? In this case, some rumors known as the truth for a long time a year or more, some of them are exposed as false information in quite a short time then forgot by people. At last but not the least, information from the advertisements in magazines, newspapers and televisions are also confusing people by its various ways of expression.

Advertisements, which are appealing customers with fabulous pictures, words of the new productions, always confuse us when we make a decision. Because every advertisement says its production is the best in quality one among all of the others, while another one says the production has both good quality and beautiful shape. How can we make a right choice based with the information, since most of us don't have professional knowledge of these products? What is truth? It's a difficult problem for people.

Considering all the factors above, we could safely come to the conclusion that there is a great deal of data make people can not judge, identify or make a decision correctly. But I believe, more and more journalists are doing their best to solving the problems and providing reliable news and information to readers.

[ 本帖最后由 jin776 于 2008-2-27 14:26 编辑 ]

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戴安娜王妃似乎是1997年的某天死的
高調為人 低調做事  無敵叛逆 PREPARE FOR GLORY
背单词有妙招『分享』

考前所有注意事项『分享』

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suggestion:
1.在托福4分作文的标准中关于框架有一条要求是"衔接紧密,过渡自然",是说段落之间的句子要有很强的连接性.  thus  楼主在说Topic Sentence 之前应该加上transition words 比如 Above all, my main reason is that, another reason is that, furthermore ,also, moveover,  in conclusion all in all........
2.看的出来楼主很多句子都意在其强调作用特别是用了很多问句. 但是力度并不够,不够"强调" 强调句式最主要的句型就是 It is ...that...句型 eg.who could tell the truth about the death of Princess Diana in 1997?-> who was that could tell the turth about the ....... 楼主因该尝试以后多用这个句型. 楼主的
who knows 力度还是不够 如果非要who knows 可以加些 at all & ever ,never 来加强语气
eg: 原文who knows the truth at the first time they saw it?
who ever knows the truth they saw it at the first time?

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