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TOEFL呕心沥血如万刀插心之处女作! 请猛拍

TOEFL呕心沥血如万刀插心之处女作! 请猛拍

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
   
   There is no consensus among people as to such an argument: some people maintain that parents are the best teachers, while others may not agree. From my personal angle alone, parents are endowed many gifts to be their children’s best teachers. Thus the former point coincides with mine.
For one thing, children spend more time with their parents than the teachers at school. The teachers can only communicate with the students at classes, while the parents live with them day and night. As a result, there are more chances for the education from parents.
   For another, it is more likely for children set their parents as examples. As a research demonstrates, a great deal of people's idols are very their parents. Admired by their children, the parents may feel easy to inject knowledge and marol to the next generation.
   What is more, a decision of the parents may have an sweeping effect on the children’s education. Let’s focus on the Chinese popular allusion about Mencious’ mother. She moved her home for there times to find a perfect place where Mencious could concentrated on his study. It is no exaggeration to say that his mother’s decision made an great contribution to Mencious’s success.  
    From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably draw a conclusion that our best teachers are our parents.

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粗略看了一下,最大的缺点是不够specific
光这一点就足够导致作文低分
第一第二个观点只用三句话进行了论证,甚至根本没有详细的例子
偌大的一个论坛,北工大的校友咋那么少涅= =
在我20岁的时候, make a big difference!
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感谢楼上。
我也是苦于此。我时在找不出合适的例子,还要是美国人了解的。着需要平时的积累吗?
在考场上拿来就用是吗?
请指教

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文章之间句子连贯不好。
还有如何锻造英文行文的思维,还请高手值点

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有些词 有些词像是刻意背的 和整体文章不符 是不是短了点?字数多少呢?感觉 客套话有点多
加油吧!!

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I offer the version of the opposite view.

The first point is that parents care too much about us. They often watch  us in the eye of protector.

Secondly, parents easily pass their value to us. But you know youth may have generation gap with them.
Last, parents want us to have similar interest with them. Say if they like science, they hope us to study science in future.
Where there is a will, there is a way.
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