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In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon. Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.


It goes without saying that people nowadays have leaded a much longer life than those who lived in hundred years ago. In other words, we are having better insurance of our lives, which help us to live longer. With the rapid improvement of knowledge we have concerning this planet and the whole nature, I believe that there are some key factor, for instance, better health treatment, deeper understanding of this world and higher technology, along with more multiply choices for entertainment have lead to this result of longer lives.

To begin with, there is no doubt that our treatment for health these days has much improved. People now process better facilities and technologies to cure disease. Therefore, some diseases that were regarded as incurable before, probably is nothing to us right now. Also, scientists have always been searching for medicines that can longer people's lives.

Furthermore, with the high technology increasingly developed these days, we now have better understanding of the world, concerning the aspect of where do we come from, what does the earth look like at the very beginning and more. Thus, people will know better of the current situation. And because of so, many habits of us which were extremely bad for the earth, have now been diminish and even disappear.

Finally, not only have we improved our life in the scientific aspect but also in the humanity aspect. It can be easily seen that people have more ways of entertainment nowadays, for instance, reading books, watching movies, travelling around the world and more. These things, as well, help us to gain more for our spirit. And by doing these things, people may always feel full instead of walking around find nothing to do.

In conclusion, many factors such as better health treatment, higher technology and multiply choices for entertainment have all help us to lead a longer life. There is probably a chance that with the further development of these things, people in the future may lead even much longer life than us

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