语速适中,节奏和语感都还好。而且时间拿捏的很准。小马过河9 r3 ^+ B7 O( `+ y1 P% [
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: o; h5 }$ }2 C小马过河-新托福专业备考社区1)中间夹杂着少量的uh, um之类的语气词。可能有时是为了buy time to think.
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2)个别音的不准确。如: /l/ 可能受到母语的影响。place, play, player. /ai/ as in child. www.xiaomaguohe.net9 i# ]# X, }7 L+ h
3)个别词的用法和搭配还存在问题。如: honest 应改为honesty. learn knowledge 是中式表达。动词用 get, gain, obtain, acquire, capture都可以。
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或 I have played basketball (games) since I was six years old.
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过去式会偶尔忽略。如: I had (not HAVE) to do everything by myself.
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总体感觉还不错。如果稍加注意这些细节问题,高分在望。加油!会成功!