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各位大牛的才学先拜了~~~求狠拍 3Q的ORZ

各位大牛的才学先拜了~~~求狠拍 3Q的ORZ

因为要敢考  实在抱歉麻烦大家了 水平还是很低  嘻嘻
3Q的ORZ


Do you agree or disagree with following statement
At present people spend much time on enjoyment rather than doing the things they should do?


Recently a piece of questionnaire about do you spend much time on enjoyment is currently of great concern to the masses. The result of survey is many people choose the answer is yes because they often feel tired and pressure. Indeed, nowadays as the technology is continuous speeding up, the beat of life is also speeding up. Consequently, our body may emerge a sort of symptom that can make our feel uncomfortable. But this can’t become a strongly reason which can let us to obliged to enjoyment. So in my opinion, a successful person should only spend much time on the things they should do, not on enjoyment at any time. My reasons are as follows

Foremost, most of people include me is not willing to accept a task which can repeat many times a day, such as to work, to study, I always complain my study. By comparison, we even more like to choose enjoyment. However as I just said I do not like these, not means I don’t do it any more.
For life also for my dream, I must finish the ration task everyday, this means I can not spend much time on enjoyment. So I think most of people’s idea is coincide to me. Because among of us is still survive in the period of material civilization.

Fortunately, we are born on this era that need not hunt and not live in a cave, even not the war. Just for our ancestor’s striving hard everyday, so that we have such a brilliant life. But face to this kind of life, instead of spending much time on enjoyment, we should create more convenient life to give our offspring.

Finally, among of people whose age is same as me have this experience that before not finished the work, we can not really enjoy, because our mind is not get really relax, the fact is backward our initial idea that we want to have a funny. So, we may as well concern much time on thing where our mind as give up the enjoyment.

In a conclusion, everyone do not let the idea of enjoyment to overwhelmed our dream, in spite of the fact the way pursuing it is so arduous.

[ 本帖最后由 natalie 于 2008-3-9 20:19 编辑 ]

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technology is continuous speeding up, the beat of life is also speeding up

建议这样些写“
With the deve. of tech, the tempo of our life is greatly speeding up.
Where there is a will, there is a way.
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5月15日作文题9

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谢谢  谢谢了  
鞠躬鞠躬!!!!
我本来是想用独立主格形式的
但水平太低  写成这样了

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I don't think it is proper to begin with your survey of that question.
You can directly state this title.

And the reasons are not well organized, I think.
You must have some more important supporting details and some less.
Where there is a will, there is a way.
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5月15日作文题9

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You're welcome..
Where there is a will, there is a way.
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5月15日作文题9

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呵呵
再次鞠躬鞠躬!~!~!
嘻嘻!~!~!~!
楼下还有一篇

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